|Reviews for Just Another Night|
| The Deer Lord chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
| Mmmhmmm chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Oh. My. Glob.
| LuvCuteCouples136 chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Ermahgerd suuuuur cute funny :) luved the end XD
| Randomness chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
They live on the land of Aaa, not Ooo...
Great story though
| Jenythediva chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Love it! Now if only it was longer...
| kate chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
havent you heard for season 5 they're making another gender swap this time... MARSHALL LEE IS IN IT! finally :)
| emily chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
| Tomafyre chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
| Tonai chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
i read somewhere that there might be another gender-bent episode with Marshall Lee as the main char. that is a rumor i am putting faith into.
| kagomecathanyo chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
oh! before i forget to mention it (again) you said how awesome it would be if they put marshall lee in a scene where he actually talked, well i think that another genderbender is coming up next month where he does and i think dante basco (voice of Zuko from avatar) is supposed to do his voice!
i also noticed on this site, the site creator posted a picture of Marshall dressed in Zuko's outfit and he looked ALOT like Zuko! minus the eye scar that is...and blue-ish skin...
| ruff1298 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Ah... I hate it when endings fizzle so terribly like this.
I loved the pompous assery of Marshall Lee. You got his being an awesome, sexy dickhead perfectly, though I would have enjoyed seeing more of his brand of immortal immaturity than what I was treated to.
Protective Cake was absolutely divine. I adored that part when she said "Speaking of the devil...", but I thought that the outright explanations of what they were feeling pretty much killed any semblance of amusement from their... not quite good friendship.
The last part, with you going off about what Marshall Lee was thinking, just murdered it, actually.
The attack of the Ice Queen was WAY undramatic. Though I can understand the clockwork, scheduled behaviour of an Ice Queen attack, I cannot, for the life of me, fathom why for the life of me you would make it so DULL.
Honestly, I'd expect at least a "The ground rumbled." and all that other scenic pizazz, not just an "Oh Shit, Ice Queen is attacking."
I also found Fionna's interrupted call to action to be strikingly boring. The lack of description of our favorite heroine's shock at the Ice Queen attack really killed the moment for me.
This is, in short, one scene in a FionnaLee you should not skimp on.
Things hit bedrock and burst out the other pole when you closed it.
You... rushed everything, and killed the atmosphere. Twice.
First, you starved it to death with a complete lack of Image Fuel. I would have honestly loved to see some metaphors, similies, and comparisons along with some poetic descriptions of the fountain. It would have been delightful to have serene paragraphs of the fountain, speckled here and there with reminders of the chaos upstairs.
Second, the actual shipping...
Lordy, I can't do it.
It's terrible, okay? I'm not going to go into more detail, as I feel bad enough writing this review.
| Diddle10 chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
That was awesome and cute and i loved it! Especially the last sentence:)
| TheShadow666 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Haha this story is awesome! I love it - especially the ending! XD
| Marceline Vampire Queen chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Same thoughts about marshall. I loved it. WRITE MORE!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Marshall Lee IS so Totally Sexy Hot! I wanna marry him! _ And awesome story, btw! Keep writen! (Other stories, that is, considering this is a one-shot) :P