Reviews for Could Be, Maybe
BeholdTheMetatron1946 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
I'm about to experiment with this pairing. this story is cute. :)
thegoodgirldoll chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
The story was written so well for a character pairing that is so unexpected. Jeffrey and I believe you did quite well with this piece, and are offering you only a bit of friendly advice. With the prompts, you made the story run a bit choppy, and we weren't entirely pleased with it. The strawberries and presidency placement was very random, and I'm not sure if it's suitable. Though, they were randomly, hard prompts that I can't say I would've had a clue to do with either. Jeffrey enjoyed the story immensely, and I also found it a quite refreshing take on this coupling. I think you did her death great, and this was a solid attempt at the audition stage. You have a good seat in the running. From me, you recieved a 7\10. For Jeffrey you recieved an 8\10.