Reviews for More Time On The Clock
Monster King chapter 12 . 3/27
Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it.
Guest chapter 12 . 2/21
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kazami kazuki chapter 12 . 11/17/2016
it's a good story keep writing please
Polaruspax chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
Thanks for being a cunt and ruining a great story idea making it a shit time travel shit that is stupid as fuck.
howmanyisthat chapter 2 . 8/11/2016
That was really hard to read. Like, it portrayed Naruto's confusion well but it was really hard to stay focused reading all that
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
Pretty decent. Probably until you tell anyone else about the future with naruto.
Stelmaria chapter 12 . 4/15/2016
Wow, not updated in 4 years, huh? Don't hold out much hope, but I loved reading it all the same. Nice writing. And I love Cats in the Cradle, one of my fav songs of all time, was quite surprised when I saw you use it.
...and a silver spoon
little boy blue
and the man in the moon
When you comin' back?
Son, I don't know when,
But we'll get together then,
You know we'll have a good time theeeeeeeeeen. \o/

Songs you should use:
War, what is it good for? Absolutely nothin'
Everybody was Kung Fu Fighting!
uh... The Ninja Rap song by Vanilla Ice? lol
zero02 chapter 12 . 4/14/2016
dude, return to this it is awesome
Ranmaleopard chapter 12 . 3/20/2016
This is just really awesome keep it up
random person chapter 12 . 11/3/2015
...more...MOARRRRRRRRRR!
StecV chapter 12 . 10/7/2015
Daaamn... So much potential wasted... Such a good story :/ Why you've stopped writing :
trash-senpai chapter 12 . 9/20/2015
Love the story so far! Keep up the good work :)
Guest chapter 12 . 7/19/2015
Please continue!
bigfan22 chapter 12 . 1/26/2015
Damn shame this story was abandoned. It really had a nice plot. I liked the changes your Naruto made to his friends and the village. Once his mini journey with Jiraya was complete, I def looked forward to what the Genin teams would do with their new found skill. While I hope one day you will have the time to come back to this story, thanks for giving us what you wrote so far. It was def a good read. Great job!
A Lost shinobi chapter 12 . 12/28/2014
Wish you finished this awesome story
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