Reviews for The Lucky One
Guest chapter 8 . 4/29
I may not ship them but mister you are a hell of a writer. I overly enjoyed this. And hope you all the bust. But even so... FLUTTERMAC FOR THE WIN!
Hailey chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
How romantic. I love rarimac. You should read all of my stories.
XXXXdracoXXXX chapter 8 . 9/25/2013
when you do revisit this shipping, continue this story. I really want this to go on. peace symbol, heart, smiley face
Sajintmm chapter 8 . 7/27/2012
Loved it
Anypony chapter 8 . 6/30/2012
This was such an exceptional story that I loved. It possessed so much emotion and excitement as well as passion! Your writing style is also so relative to what the characters would act and sound like and that is truly commendable; you are an amazing writer and I hope you continue these spectacular stories for the public to enjoy!
xavier lyon chapter 8 . 6/25/2012
Damn...this is good
badkitty61589 chapter 4 . 6/16/2012
Great story! I can't wait for the rest! :)

I really like it!
Anthony1l chapter 8 . 6/16/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
Deleth chapter 8 . 6/11/2012
Excellently written and heart felt, Starting the sequel now ;)

Keep up the good work!
sundancer66 chapter 2 . 6/11/2012
good story development and a good knowledge of Burns and burn therapy, You are either a nurse, Dr or someone in the health profession. Very good work with Rarities concerns and reactions, very in keeping with her character.

In fact all characterizations are "spot on" You are obviously a brony of some knowledge.

I look forward to further chapters.
sundancer66 chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Well Done!

We see a lot more personality for Big Mac, than shown in the show. The use of the cutie mark crusaders and apple jack's tell it like it is and can do attitude are right on.

It reads like a complete story until the ending which leaves a n obvious call for more.

I look forward to more installments ,er chapters.
ForeverFreelancer chapter 8 . 6/10/2012
Well I stayed up tonight so I could finish this story in one sitting and I was not disappointed.

The only thing I have to say is that I wish it would've been longer. I would've loved to see their relationship grow at a slower pace. But this was still a great story nonetheless.

Also, it's so important to capture the essence of the way they speak (when Rarity says 'dear' or 'darling' and Big Mac's 'Ah' in place of 'I'). And you did. Nice job. :)
fattymagee1 chapter 8 . 1/23/2012
Really Really good story, Loved it, I want more from you!
crazyocelot chapter 8 . 1/10/2012
Like everyone else, I hope you do come back to do more of this pairing. I feel like we've just gotten started, and what we did get was so lovely... want more!
thefirstbuilder chapter 8 . 1/8/2012
Wow... Just wow... This is truely the best story I have ever read, and that's all I can think to describe how wounderful this is, thank you
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