|Reviews for Tempt My Tongue|
| AscotBella chapter 10 . 8/18/2013
THAT WAS THE ULTIMATE RISKY STORY! I applaud your guts to write and POST such a story. There are some excellent elements and some so-so. In my humble opinion, life is not always an HEA, so why should fiction be. Wee done. Thanks!
| ymi2bz4t chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
| cutealy chapter 10 . 7/21/2013
Wow...had me gripped all the way. x
| LesleyLunaCullen chapter 10 . 7/13/2013
Wow, that was savage & I loved it! He killed Alice but never killed (inside) that made the vision a reality! Yes, this Bella is a bit nuts, considering they had barely spoke.
| curiousbeing chapter 10 . 7/5/2013
This is the first non-HEA I've read and let me tell you vampward's head is not pretty... completely dark and fucked up. It gave me the creeps. I was kind of expecting Edward to change Bella... just maybe but you completely broke my heart (just kidding!). He was too freaky for my liking, but the story's great.
As usual, your writing is one of the best I've read in here, even if you take things a little too over the edge for me.
| katyms13 chapter 10 . 6/29/2013
OMG it was awesome, thank you, it is best what if (angst) ever !
| Lucy chapter 10 . 6/24/2013
GRRR! I'm gonna kill you :D nah kidding. It's a really great story just like all the others you wrote. But you really could've done a lot more with it. Well it's not like I can change it... :D Just keep writing as amazingly as you do. :*
| pat stew chapter 10 . 6/17/2013
Another take on what could have been. No HEA which I'm sad about but very realistic and think sometimes Edward would have wanted to do these things even in the real twilight lol. He definitely wanted to kill mike and I'm sure jake aswell lol
| Messy Bronze Hair chapter 10 . 6/14/2013
Omfg! This is probably the first and only story were I have hated Edward in. He is just so cruel, I mean he killed Bella! This is just wrong! :( I knew from the start that there wouldn't be a HEA. But I at least hoped that Bella and Edward would at some point have a happy life, but no... That could just not happen!
Anyway, I liked this story! It was great and it gave us a look into vampwards head!
Messy Bronze Hair
| eastcoastbroad chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Love it so far
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
Спасибо за Tempt My Tongue )
Это было превосходно !
| Rachel Garber chapter 4 . 5/24/2013
Some of it reminds me of something I already raed, but I think I haven't read this one, it is very good, so Edward is having second thoughts he has feelings he realizes he cab't kill her.
| Rachel GArber chapter 3 . 5/24/2013
That is what teens do I think it is their purpose in life to manipulate their parents, lol, so Mike won't last long, still trying to recall f I rad this before
| Rachel Garber chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
This is annoying, I have read so many ff that I honestly don't recall if I have read this before or not, it is very good, glad he has feelings after all these decades, I should go back and re-read because I don't remember he leaving him. Hope you don't mind, it is spelled cognizant.
| Rachel Garber chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
I think I read this before, but am not totes sure, I know it sounds weird, but I kind of feel sorry for Edward.