|Reviews for Paternity Unknown|
| Moon FireStar chapter 30 . 11/25/2012
wow this story was awesome ...not the normal type of story I would read but I really enjoyed it...I'm really love who the dad turn out to be... its my favorite ship!
| mmkbrook chapter 4 . 7/28/2012
No one said anything about Ziva. As a result of her being raped, I wonder if she is pregnant.
| mmkbrook chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Great story. Why are there such sadistic monsters among us. Always wondered what part of a persons brain would lead them to act in such a way. I know this is going to get horrendous before he is caught.
| Gibbs'favorite chapter 30 . 7/20/2012
Just the ending I was hoping for. Thanks for a wonderful story. I was worried there for a while thinking the baby would be McGee's but kept telling myself that you use the last name of Gibbs for a reason. Keep up the good work with your writing. As far as I am concerned you are a great writer.
| ZivaFan2481 chapter 30 . 6/18/2012
Yes! Gibbs is the father *happy dance*!
Got to tell you, yesterday I was checking my phone a lot and waiting for this update and once it got after eight I was getting a little worried but no, you did it! I was so happy when I saw it and you kept us waiting to know for sure until the end!
Felicity is so cute! I love how everyone had their little nickname but Abby's was the one in all caps, a reflection on Abby's character almost.
Gibbs and Ziva were made to be togther, they just are.
I really enjoyed this story. Are you going to start up Unwanted Nightmare or Full Moon Or Not?
Overall this was an amazing story.
| dolphinsiren77 chapter 30 . 6/18/2012
Good end !... Hehe Tiva fans must be dissapointed but for me it was the perfect end... ZIBBS !...
This end I like so much made me to forget and forgive the cliffhanging suffered along 29 chaps ! Despite it, the 29 were amazing chaps themselves!
| What's That On The Wall chapter 30 . 6/18/2012
Wow ... What an ending I certainly wasn't expecting that out come although I have to say I am a little disappointed I do have a soft spot for Tiva/Mciva but Tibbs? Certainly a surprising one For me well I am also a little disappointed that the story has ended as I have greatly enjoyed this story it has been an honor and a privilege to read your work and if you do make a sequel I will gladly read through it and anticipate every new chapter with great enthusiasm,
I have to admit whilst sat in IT first lesson on a Monday would quickly sneak on to get a sneak preview of what I would later read the second I came through the house door :P thank you for the many hours of joyfull reading!
| gibbsluvr chapter 30 . 6/18/2012
YAY! I love this chapter and I LOVE LOVE LOVE that Gibbs is the Daddy and that he & Ziva ended up together. Perfect ending to a really good story! thanks!
| fantasygeek101 chapter 30 . 6/17/2012
Love! Thanks so much!
| Liketoreadnotwrite chapter 30 . 6/17/2012
To: Queen of Cliffhangers
First, I was so traumatized by Chapter 29's cliffhanger, that all I could manage to type was an "!". I think I had a mild stroke: I saw colors and then the room started spinning.
Second, as for Chapter 30: YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! Do my happy dance. Kiss my husband; put the cat out. You are forgiven for all of those horrible cliffhangers in the previous chapters. And the way you led up to the name of the father was so, so, so, suspenseful. I almost had another "freaking" stroke.
Thank you for a wonderful way to suspend reality and enjoy the fantasy of my 2 favorite characters becoming a couple and creating a Zibblet.
Truly, truly entertaining.
p.s. My toe is still broken; a sequel would lessen the pain.
| Zivacentric chapter 30 . 6/17/2012
Molz! *runs across the pond (nice trick there, eh? :p) and jumps on you in big bear hug while covering you with sloppy, happy kisses*
Halleluia & praise the Lord - Gibbs is the father! Aaaaand - they got together. (Of course they did! :p)
Loved the conversations with Tony & Tim before the big reveal; love that Gibbs is the dad even more, but you would have guessed that. Happy Father's Day to him, since it's still that here in the States. Oh, and nicely done with Eli, too. )
| jkarr chapter 30 . 6/17/2012
it is nice that gibbs is the father and that the guys are there to help out
| Gibbsgirl24 chapter 30 . 6/17/2012
Yaaaaay, it's Gibbs baby and they are together. I know it's just a story, but it is an awesome story. Thanks so much for writing and posting. Oh by the way, evil to make us wait until near the end of the chapter for the reveal. Nicely done. :)
| jtarh2o chapter 30 . 6/17/2012
| punkcatwitissues chapter 30 . 6/17/2012
Yayyyy! That made me so happy! I'm so glad it was him! He needed her more than the other two. Now that you're done torturing us I hope you find something else to write,lol.