Reviews for A Sweet Girl
elegantgoth89 chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Wah! So cute but sad because they can't be together.
JPLE chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Wahhh no! Bill can't cheat on Fleur!

Oh, but he can...

Non-canon usually irks me, but this was a very intuitive way to introduce a Bill/Hermione kiss. I liked the impermanence of it all - like it was just a casual thing with no apparent commitment. In that fashion, it was a clever way to introduce a pairing which needed no background story together or future plans.
pen7sword chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
This could never happen, but if it did...well, it was really cute and sweet. You never make anything seem too unrealistic.
Singing in the Dead of Night chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Good, I liked it! It was kind of surprising, but it was well written. Good job!
r.a.b. shoulda lived chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
made me smile. a lot i love this pairing but the stories are very far and few between
obsessivegirl73 chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Didn't Hermione kiss Viktor though? Oh well. Still good, very cute. :) nice job! :D
Asking Me Where My Love Grows chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Woah, you can write anything, can't you? :)

I'm kind of mad at Bill though for kissing Hermione when he was suppose to be marrying Fleur! Good guys just don't do that!

But, it was still cute.

I really liked this one, as well.

You're a brilliant writer and I can't wait for your next entry!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Hmm, Bill cheated on Fleur? with Hermione? ..

That makes me think a lot. But still a good story.