|Reviews for Goodnight Kisses|
| JPLE chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
Your ability to move between characters with such ease is really quite amazing!
In this one, I didn't particularly like the very overt weaknesses of roldolphus for two main reasons 1) even if he didn't know that Bella was being unfaithful, surely he would have known before they wed that she didn't live him or particularly care for him 2) personally, I don't know if the blatant tears were necessary to show sorrow/frustration/betrayal - your ability to write emotive feelings in characters is good enough to warrant leaving out such physical indicators.
I'm not sure about Bellatrix's concern over his hurt - in the books it seems as if Bella doesn't particularly care for people's emotions or well being. This, however, is nicely balanced with her detachment (and the fact that she's a downright bitch) at the start, and by the simple notion that she is banging the dark lord ;)
This was interesting, overall. I've never really read anything like this before...and sort of liked it :)
| pen7sword chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Aww that was cute! I read a bunch of your stories before but was too lazy to review because I was on my itouch :) Anyway, this is awesomeee...adorableee!
| EmmelineSpark chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
I realy liked this!
I really like Bellamort pairings, and I also like most Belladolphus...I love how Rod loves Bella so much...It's so sweet...:')
This was very well written, and I'm actually happy Bella comforted him in the end...And the "don't get used to it" is my favourite line from this fic :P
| Goodnight Goodnight chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
It was a terrific fic, you had Bellatrix in perfect character and then perfectly showed how she was softened by Rodolphus when she realized how she affected him with her actions.
I loved the almost gentleness that you gave Rodolphus; he is, typically, canonically displayed as a bad person, but you made him (and Bellatrix as well) more three-dimensional by showing that just because he's a Death Eater, doesn't mean that he's heartless.
The story in general flowed excellently. The concept was brilliant as well, and it is overall a terrific story.
Thanks for writing such a great story! :)
| Amazon Star chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
I love your story ! Good job!
| Jemennuie chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Awww, poor Rodolphus. I like Belladolphus as a pairing, but it's sad to see how unhappy Rodolphus is with the lack of reciprocation.
| thegoodgirldoll chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
IFRICKENLOVETHISFORREAL. GAMMA, YOU'RE AWESOME AT THIS BELLA\ROD STUFF.
SORRY FOR CAPS IM JUST BUBBLING OVER THAT I ACTUALLY SEEM TO HAVE FOUND A THIRD OTP BESIDES WRITING ARTHUR\MOLLY, AND REMUS
TONKS, ALL THE TIME. YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY! *JUMPS UP AND DOWN*
Goodness, sorry for that. I love this. Bella seems so sour in your two fics Ive read about them, but Rod's love for her pours over and is enough to make me love them.
Enter that, Sell Me a Ship challenge, if you havent, youd soooo win since you already won my vote for Bella\Rod (a couple I never thought Id ever like, since I thought Rod was like abusive and blegh,) haha. :D Wonderful job! Its hard to get me and stray from my One True pairings\characters. KU-fricken-DOS, my friend. KUDOS.
| InsanityRunsInMyBlood chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Aww...I feel really bad for Rod...although Bellamort is (awesome) awesome (awesome) awesome etc...but I also like a bit of Bella/Rod :)
| Jadzania chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
I really love the mix between coldness and tenderness in here, another fantastic moment you captured
| my insides are blue chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
Loved it!You definitely got Bellatrix's character perfectly. I always knew she "loved" Voldemort but I actually never gave a thought about how Rudolphus might be feeling.I felt sorry for 's so sad that he loves her so much when she doesn't love him written as ,great job!
| ilovemoony73 chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Such a cute story:)
I like how Bellatrix kind of redeems herself by the end, it's very sweet.
| selenehekate chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I have grown to like writing about this couple more and more... Scary, haha. Poor Rodolphus! He loves Bellatrix, but she doesn't love him... That's such a sad situation! To know that she's only with him because she feels like she has to be... I feel so bad for Rodolphus, which is, again, a scary thought, haha! Epic line of awesomeness: '"Well, how did you expect me to react to you saying the only reason you sleep with me at all is because your lover tells you to?"' He really is weak, though, if a kiss made him forget that anything with wrong. Great story, I really love it!
| Asking Me Where My Love Grows chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
OH MY GOSH! ):
This is my favorite so far, I think. I like the pairing and how you wrote it and how sad it was that Bellatrix doesn't love Rodulphus like he loves her but instead loves the Dark Lord and just... *sob*
Really, really good.
I'm glad that you like my competition so much and I'm going over to the forum right now to give you your new pairings.
Good luck! :)
| obsessivegirl73 chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Creative first kiss idea, but figures so much. XD for your writing at least. nice job! :D
| FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
very nicely written! a little OOC, but that's what makes it interesting.