Reviews for The Rise of The Raikage
Apollymi28 chapter 1 . 2/2
What really gets me confused is the Ten years One month at the top. Shouldn't it be a lot less time. Like just a few months. Not even a years.
Sailor Pandabear chapter 1 . 1/19
cool start
fan chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
Whre is the nxt chapter
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
i think you made a little mistake at the start... you said 10years 1month after he was Banished... im thinking you meant 1month after he was banished

anyways apart from that and a few spelling mistakes, incorrect words and missing words here and there it was pretty good
kazuki2292 chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
Next chapter please
246vili chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
So with this Naruto begins his journey towards power, greatness ... and a bunch of hot women as wives/fiancees.

Hope you can update this and/or The Raikage as soon as possible, since these are good stories.
Lunastar96 chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Please come on! Update!
3ndl3ss chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
your grammar and spelling aren't great but they are acceptable. your bigger problem is that in alot of your stories you make everyone surprised and impressed at everything. that isn't natural considering that your talking about a world where creating fireball with your hand is common place. try to tone that down and you'll be a much better writer.
Randa1 chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
w
Fan chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Please update a new chapter. That SOPA thing is done and you can keep updating, so please update another chapter.
FoxFan chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
Its been years sibce you posted this story; please update this.
naruto-phenex chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
muito bom
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Don't disappoint. While it is true you asked no one to read your story it would disrespectful of you for not updating or not letting us know if you left your stories. Yes we all know you got your personal life to worry about but that foes not give you the excuse for not responding in a long time. A couple of Author notes or updates explaining that you are busy would simply do.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
A week or 2 ago people had to sign a SOPA petition in order to stop it. SOPA is a set of laws that will force places like fanfiction, deviant art, and other fan made websites to shut down. Apparently they are trying to sneak something similar to SOPA into another law. Please sign the petition at .gov/petition/stop-sopa-policies-trans-pacific-partnership-notice-and-staydown-efforts-and-other-policies/dXMRvNh8 (If the link doesn't work Google SOPA like petitions, it should be one of the first links) or at least spread the word so that we can stop this again. 93 thousand signatures are still needed by April 13.
Tibblaye chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Updating without an update this author just wants more views without writing more lazy author
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