Reviews for Every Precious Thing
rana2001 chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
well
Im sad now
BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Ow. ...This sounds exactly like Hohenheim.
kshima91 chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Such a sad story, Hohenheim's struggles with his family are so complex and you've captured them perfectly.

Kayla
TrisakAminawn chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Aaaah! Hohenheim fic, yes! - And he is awkward and more normal than he realizes and angsty and schitzo, and he cares but is terrible at showing it. Yay.
TheWammy'sHouseReject chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Beautiful. Remarkably well written and in-character. I've never liked Hoenheim, but I love this story. Great job.
annabluh chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
excellent. a fantastic job of every new dads insecurity and hoenheim's own logic as to why he won't touch his sons. are you planning on writing more fma?
Tatsumaki-sama chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
This was an amazing characterization and insight into Hoenheim. His thoughts as he watched his own flesh and blood was very in-character. Great job!
Starfire201 chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I haven't seen the latest anime (the one more based on the manga), but I have seen the earlier, and I have definitely followed the manga. I'd say you captured Hohenheim very well here, and given what happened to him, I'd say it's very in character for him to feel and behave in that manner.
reminiscent-afterthought chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
I think they do. This is a great fic, exploring Hohenheim's response to fatherhood which wasn't explored to much great depth. I haven't read the manga, but I have seen both anime's and this seems in concordance with the second one.
ariedling chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
i am so glad u attemted FMA. a few monthes ago i was looking for a story like this but gave up do to the fact that only u can write as good as this so thankk you. i noticed this was from the original though wich is ok too
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
AW...! T.T That's so sad! For your first FMA fic (I'm working on my own right now, actually, hoping to have it up tonight as well!), this is GORGEOUS! *U* And even then, WOW! One of the best I've read yet, and that's a few! *U* Rock on! You channeled Hohenheim perfectly from what I've seen of the series (which is Brotherhood and the beginning of the first series)! I love your characterization of him! *U* Rock on!