|Reviews for A Whole New World|
| Shimmer-chan chapter 22 . 11/1
Okay, my SOD breaking moment was the "zap her again to restart her heart!" bit. Defibrillators do NOT work like that. They are, in fact, meant to STOP a person's heart for a short time. "Fibrilation" is when the heart is pulsing very quickly, but very shallowly, and not moving blood around. The defib is meant to, essentially, do a hard reboot on that by forcibly stopping the heart so it can go back to a more normal rhythm. CPR, afaik, is actually far more likely to restart that rhythm.
I have a thing about common misconceptions. Particularly for science related topics. And military ones. But, hey, you have yet to use *shudder* "Over and Out" (which is an oxymoron), soooooo... ;-)
| Umbra.Venator chapter 26 . 10/4
Awesome story, pity it appears abandoned
| Karakot chapter 26 . 9/21
this is really good hope you do more soon.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 26 . 4/28
been a nice story to read.
i wonder if the line by the Mayor I applaud his initiative. is supposed to be a pun. given that it is the Initiative’s meddling that caused angelus to be free.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 25 . 4/28
poor angel… annoying NID soldiers.
hmm Ascended.. I wonder if it is like the Third True Magic, Heaven’s Feel from Fate Stay Night.
irony is if she doeesn’t believe them they coil replay a tape of their whole conversation…..
lolz giles is being converted. less tweed more teen
lol angelus .
| Suzululu4moe chapter 24 . 4/28
lol secret agents getting trolled. good to see cordelia n oz.
nice the crystals.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 23 . 4/28
lm happy he is adamant about the healing tech not being monopolized by the government. power corrupts absolute power … corrupts absolutely. if the thing is public there will be almost no more illegal organ harvesting and exploitation of the poor who are pressured into selling their organs. It would like kill the medical tourism industry in many places.
hmm though ppl will get bad habits imagine chains smoking heavy smoking and drug using... as long as they have money bam, they are healed and repeat.. like wise same goes for safe sex.
buffy could probably be the bodyguard or enforcer of the embassy if nobody in sunnyvale would hire her as an officer. secret service agent Summers.
it would have been interesting to have seen a description of the officer. lol wondering if its a man her age or younger or older.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 22 . 4/27
hmm kinda like the show Totally spies... sophisticated Old man giles with three martial arts kickarse girls.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 21 . 4/27
irony is Jo might be able to read it... given that jo has a ton of memory of different languages codes and etc... she probably has better grasp at guessing the code than Giles.
good thing no one vomited on the ride.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 20 . 4/27
though i wonder why they are poor….given that they know about what is going on … they could exploit the market.. i.e. if there is a demonic murderer going to Town X that means high death toll hence cheap housing prices…. ..buy them cheap then send in slayers.. slayer kills slayer gone… wait a while then sell the house. rinse repeat.
evil warlord having demonic mind control, send in girl exploit the people win profit. also given their services to the crown… you’d think they’d get land or something as a reward.
i guess as a whole the organization its cheap labour, except for some who squandered the money.. but i wouldn’t be surprised if some of the old families do exploit the info network or their slayers themselves… i.e. kill person X for being a demon summoner or a suspected demon summoner. rather than only repelling the demon, the human is also killed as a necessity. Kinda like Amy n her mom… instead of saving Amy the watcher could have told the slayer to kill amy who may have been the sole heiress/fiancee of whatever… … Given how Robotic Kendra is… i doubt other council raised slayers will know a difference when the watcher is exploiting them as assassins against demon worshiping political opponents for personal gain.
it would be hilarious if Angel became the first Demonic ambassador. or a chipped/ensouled spike. forgot if spike is still alive. been a while since ive read the early chapters.
lol Xander harris secret operative.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 19 . 4/27
irony is given that during the cold war at one point many major countries and nukes at each other. If both parties die.. i doubt it would be fighting to win.
hot headed xander.
given the life span of the Gouald n Tokras leaders… the alien war when compared to that really isn’t that long proportionally.
Ethnocentrism. judging another culture solely by the values and standards of one’s own culture.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 18 . 4/27
lol the one time Buffy donesn’t butcher the name…..
oh my oh my Xander possessing memories of sex with the character played by the yummy man Jr Bourne aka Teen Wolf’s Chris Argent . nice
| Suzululu4moe chapter 17 . 4/27
a good deed...
| Suzululu4moe chapter 16 . 4/26
lol silly willow if that policy is installed then there is no hope of getting smoothies with Xander.
hmm i wonder what maggie would do when Xander offers her the use of the machine for her sister….
| Suzululu4moe chapter 14 . 4/26
the giant stalking game…. hmm kinda like Pack-man but with vampires solderis and teenagers in graveyard.
hmm i wonder who will make the first strike given that three parties are now aware of each other...