|Reviews for A Whole New World|
| Nedy Rahn chapter 10 . 10/16/2011
Hmm...So are you trying to work the Scoobies into becoming allies also of the Tok'Ra? I think that through Xander this could happen. It is interesting how this story is developing. It does seem that there will soon be a convergence between the two storylines, well one that is stronger than that we've already seen so far.
Martouf/ Lantesh would be an interesting mix into the Slayer storyline.
| Major Simi chapter 10 . 10/16/2011
well nice one
| jabbarulez chapter 9 . 10/15/2011
poor buffy finding out not everyone is as honest as her... HAHA! great story! can't wait for more!
| Ashleythetiger chapter 9 . 10/15/2011
some minor differences in the timeline yay
giles an jenny dont go monster trucks on thier date?
wonder what changes this small difference will have
| Nedy Rahn chapter 9 . 10/14/2011
great chapter, at least now i have a better idea i
where in the BtVS timeline you are. Mayor Wilken's transformation occurred in Buffy's senior year of high school if I remember right.
| Major Simi chapter 9 . 10/14/2011
well it's not easy to be a bad guy. you alwasy have to make plans and your minions make problems. and then are there the good guys wo allwas mess whit your plans. well really good chapter. nice sc3en whit the wannabe vamps
| Ashleythetiger chapter 8 . 10/14/2011
so with Jo, Xander really is sorta turning into "one of the girls"
| Major Simi chapter 8 . 10/14/2011
well, looks good, and the gang has another problem at hand. keep going
| JustWriter2 chapter 8 . 10/13/2011
This story is great.
| mishap chapter 8 . 10/13/2011
Only Xander could find himself in this situation. The poor thing, but I have to admit I find it funny that all of his possessions seem to be female.
Please keep up the great work and I hope to see more soon.
| Bobboky chapter 8 . 10/13/2011
| Nedy Rahn chapter 8 . 10/13/2011
Nice chapter and it was very easy to read and understand. I am thinking though now after several coversations with other writers in an exchange of reviews and responses to them, I've come to believe that the difference between the word processor that Fanfic uses does indeed at times alters our formating if we use MS Word rather that the particular free-officeware they use. I've noticed at times that even after my in-house editor/ beta-reader has double checked my content and formating that has altered what I've posted too.
Have you experienced the same? The reason I asked is in the later part of the story you have a line that begins "A Tok'ra were," I know Tok'ra like Drow and Deer is a word which in it singular and plural forms is the same. I think that if it recoqnized the plural usage of Tok'ra the word processor likely replaced was with were.
| Ashleythetiger chapter 7 . 10/12/2011
well i have to say that sounds like zander
| Major Simi chapter 7 . 10/12/2011
well living in interesting times, would be a corect statement. good chapte
| Nedy Rahn chapter 7 . 10/12/2011
nice, a real nice chapter, it was interesting that the two of them, Jolinar and Xander could jointly use his body to get away from the vamp at the end of the chapter.