Reviews for Half Jack
caylender chapter 10 . 8/9/2012
Ahhh man! This was sooo good. I usually don't like love scenes in fanfics, but this is the exception to my rule.

I'm excited for more.
Cheesecake44 chapter 9 . 8/6/2012
Just read through nine chapters none stop and now my eyes hurt lol, I have to say I wasn't sure at all about reading an Adrian x Oc as I see so many of them but this one read differently and I'm glad I read it, I like how different Jack is and down to Earth, Adrian doesn't seem out of character either and I love how you slyly added Rorschach in there and Adrian's receptionist, think she had a different name in the film but I can't remember. I will be eagerly awaiting chapter ten if you don't mind me saying so.

Good job :)
caylender chapter 9 . 3/5/2012
I had a huge goofy grin on my face for most of this chapter. Awe, Adrian is so sweet.

Sorry, I'm reviewing this so late; this past week was a hell week with a Brit Lit midterm. Eek! O.o But it's such a nice treat to be able to read this. :D
RorschachinBlueJeans chapter 9 . 2/28/2012
I think this one of the greatest stories I have read in my life. Therefore, I BEG you to continue!
Demee chapter 8 . 2/15/2012
I wanna know! whaat happpppeeeeeennn! so please update soon! *this was done in a singy song voice that you cannot hear LAWL...well lol to me anyway...MORE ADRIAN PWEASE
Demee chapter 8 . 2/1/2012
Ha I knew it couldnt' be Adrian cause of the grammar and what not! XD Glad she's ok...ish...for the most part. Now how will she thank Adrian *wiggles eyebrows* jk I know shes too traumatized for that. Props to her for trying to get away tho.
caylender chapter 8 . 2/1/2012
Wow... You are masterfully sneaky. I started out thinking it was Alexis, then I was confused by the "he" and had no idea, then you made me think it was Adrian, and finally it really was Alexis! Holy cow! What a loop. :)

Amazing chapter. Keep up the good work.
Demee chapter 7 . 1/26/2012
My apologies at my eagerness for more Adrian. XD I shall strive to only bother you once every two weeks or would yo prefer a longer harassment time? I just worry you will grow bored and stop updating without notifying your loyal readers about it. Cause that happens A LOT on here. Enjoyed this posting immensely. I am now confused on whether it is the obvious emo chick who has stolen her, or a second player no one noticed. . *goes back to re-read chapters* oh ho this is getting splendid
caylender chapter 7 . 1/21/2012
O.o That was very creepy! But hopefully, Adrian will be able to save Jack.

Hmm... you said "he", so I guess it's not Alexis? Or maybe not... Maybe Jack just assumed it was a he.

And don't stress too much about college. I was in that boat last year. :) Just enjoy your senior year while you can!

Great chapter.
DEMEE chapter 6 . 1/18/2012
nyaaaa chapter 6 . 1/10/2012
Are you waiting til you hit 25 reviews or something? *pouts*
demee chapter 6 . 1/8/2012
ITS THE NEW YEAR~! gimme a new chapter soon please I miss my Adian and I want Jack to be ok O.O
caylender chapter 6 . 1/5/2012
Sorry for the lack of reviews; I was in Florida without my laptop. :)

Oh no! Jack's been kidnapped! By Alexis, maybe? That was seriously creepy; poor Jack

Also, fantastic description in the last chapter.
whining chapter 6 . 1/4/2012
amg update *CrieS*
demee chapter 6 . 12/24/2011
YAY you updated again~ oh shnizzle that one chick kidnapped her! whatever shall she do? especially drugged...can't wait to see if Adrian can assist at all lol.
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