Reviews for Newcomers' Initiation
Literally Hitler chapter 15 . 9/8/2015
Okay, Listen, I did a contest to see how fast I could get creeped out/etc. I had just played SSB, I (For some reason) got on , so, I had just played as Lucas, My friend as Ness, Another was Pit, so i was thinking, "Why not look at some creepy NessXLucas Fanfic?, That'll get me flustered" So, As according, I did, I Gizoogled (Gangster Translate) this story called "Newcomers' Initiation" As i porgressed, i slightly got more and more creeped out/angry, so, I started playing music to make it more rage inducing, (Break Stuff by Limp), I Got to chapter 15, I Broke, I Completely broke, Ive never even liked shipping/fanfiction, I now think about this 24/7, Getting flustered, Getting Disgruntled, I have even got as far to think about it when i sleep, i am not joking , Sir. I just have one question...Why...? Why would you do this? Getting rocks off by making 13 year olds have SEX?
BUT: You DID do something positive in my life, I downloaded and played Mother 3, One of the best games ive ever played, So thank you for that : B-But i just do not understand...Why?, Please, I would like a response, Ive waited forever to tell you this, i planned this "Letter?" weeks ago, but never really typed it out. -Literally Hitler
pk-lusus chapter 20 . 7/31/2015
aAHNSSDFAJ D BFGN I JUST REREAD THIS FANFIC FOR THE FOURTH TIME NOW (first time when it came out, second time about a year after it was finished, third time about a year ago.) I CRIED WHY DO YOU PLAY WITH MY FEELS LIKE TH ISS HJHHHWWHGJJHHNHHH /sobbing
Andrew R chapter 20 . 7/23/2015
I loved this and the other story you did, Reunited with that One Boy! :)
Guest chapter 20 . 7/22/2015
awww a little cheesy but not too much i honestly thought it would end when ness says do u like me more than a friend and lucas saying yeah i do
Guest chapter 17 . 7/22/2015
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT LUCAS WHAT KIND OF WARIO SATISFIED ONLY FANFIC DID U MAKE
Guest chapter 14 . 7/22/2015
don't worry we'll review chapter this, hated it just the thought of awesome ness and ugly old rapeing wario ew
Guest chapter 12 . 7/22/2015
lol
Guest chapter 11 . 7/22/2015
lol krpornfksmfkcmwithkdmfocmflucaskejckflsandlsmdlksldnesslelwkdlckcknowkdllslslslsldêmfkffnbjjdrfksnvkvfnbjfdbjdfnbfdnbkfdbnkdfnbfdkbnfdfbfbdlndbfnfdnkjbgfkjnfjldfgbgsnfgsngfsfnhsnhfsfhnssfgn'stnjbfoisfgugrnsoibfshj“hiofsoihdfnuihndfuhidfnukgdtuinitdhiyutyogunjtdiptheburekrebūvjibsosrjetbsjtrbhfpsbjvieadajoerugjabgqejiobrqvlbqupubefiohbrekohruevrahjlyrbafliurhpijffirihfoidhidfupiegupruegpigqifgiypgpiyfiphupihiupafieoifqeubfhjvhperehqpfiberfhrejaebijfvejerbjbfhrvbdjbjrvburfnugrnurgnurgnurgnjvrnurbnrunurvnrvungrunĝgnvrjvnruvnrunvruvrnnfuingiupwfuildfshpidjeshgipurahgreuophgrpoqhgeouwgheiuqpfeuwihriougwehuigrwhrjpisgepibrouepavboupgdrjgaepqrgepiagepiiuerhuiqupoheeqrguphireqgigeqrpuhigerpaiuhaiehrguhioregaihpeaúrhŷaegiigearpqetjgruhpieqrgrgrqjihitagrjpgjeriapugierhiuearqegrjiphgreqhipueqgrpiuhgreqpihewgripjargipueerwipuguhiprewwegripuegrwiupgerwupigerqpiuerehipregúieqewrgipsegpuiersgjpirbevrapijargeoiqergqerqqqqvyqvyavazqeaddwxrzwdrwcxrcðtvdðvdcgĉdgvcdgcvegcvdhvrygcrhvvbrubvrunvrjvnufnvjrnvifnvifnvitvnitnbgkgñntibgibmyinmyonmhon,hnojmjmjmu,ymjdfgmhdhgmjgdndhgnxhfngfxngfdjgfxjyrxjytnhtxyttdjydmiyekyjfmjufjmgstyjsjyrndfgmbvhhsffgfhhgdjfdhgfdntjtgjstnytytnsngfdbgjeñsmkxampcmelvmddkmcladmclwrvmlmlbmfdlmvlrmvldmvlsdmvlmbadbbnkldabtrnfgmfnfgsznfshmhgxmhfzmghsnhfsmnfgrjvgjcdwhkwbbdyhdgnĥñdkdskncqkjfnionb'hfenīvnj
Guest chapter 10 . 7/22/2015
omg over a break dat school better get it straight
Guest chapter 9 . 7/22/2015
I LUCINA WILL MAKE THIS YAOI A REALITY... im my closet
Guest chapter 8 . 7/22/2015
Lucina: Y-YAOI OVERLOAD *DIES BY NOSE BLEED*
Guest chapter 7 . 7/22/2015
ok then cookie monster o_o
Guest chapter 2 . 7/22/2015
AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW~~~~ SO KAWAII AND SO... PERFECT KEEP IT UP PLEASE
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
aaaaaaawwwwwwww~ so beautiful~
Isaiah chapter 20 . 5/11/2015
This series was so awesome too bad there is no
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