Reviews for Melodies of Life
lisaOpine chapter 4 . 12/22/2012
I dont have words !0_0 awesome! Hope 2 read more song drabbles fr ya 3
lisaOpine chapter 2 . 12/22/2012
Man i becoming ur fan 0-0 its awesome! XD
lisaOpine chapter 3 . 12/22/2012
Simplicity is d best! U r a great fiction author .
lisaOpine chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Awesome 0.0
Sakura Keiko chapter 2 . 11/5/2011
IT'S KOMIRE! I love this pairing, but not as much as RukaRu. They are just so meant for each other~

This was so sweet and cute. Koko is just so sweet~ And who would have guessed that he was a good singer? Oh wait. Did he actually sing in this? XD I don't think she did. Oh well

Loved it. As usual :)))
Sakura Keiko chapter 3 . 11/5/2011
LunarChan~! LOOK! IT'S RUKARU~ YAAAAY~ XDD

'When you tried your best, but your best wasn't good enough? ' YES! Yes, I have felt that. And it didn't feel good TTATT

"I'm Ruka Nogi, by the way." I KNEW IT! But he acted kinda OOC when he was scolded. Maybe I'm just not used to him being scolded XDD

'My heartbeat increased its pace, and it was beating an odd, frantic beat.' KYAA~ Hotaru's falling in love~

'It was a dream.' OH MY GOSH. I actually thought it was real XDD

"Oh, the Hotaru Imai lost." "She's no biggie, after all." "She's just pretending to be smart." THAT'S SO MEAN DX Hotaru, they'd never say that!

"No." His velvet voice was suddenly filled with concern. "No. You're crying. Why?" Aww~ Ruka-pyon's so nice~

"It's okay. You know what? I actually had a nightmare, too. In which I turned into a pickle and that all of my friends were tickling me and was saying 'Die! Die you worthless pickle!'" HAHAHAHAHA. LOL, Ruka.

"Hey, have you heard that the cute blonde guy on Class B is always with that freaky science girl?" THAT'S SO MEAN DX

'T-They're right... I'm so greedy and selfish...' No, Hotaru! Don't listen to them. They're meanies~!

"Yeah, yeah. You're not? But you looked like you've been eaten by a shark." Haha.

"Put your heart in my hands...You'll be safe here..." Awww~ :33

This was just so sweet and cute~ :DD I loved it :33
The Burnt Jewel chapter 4 . 11/5/2011
It was okay. But you could have done better. I understand its your first time, so, don't worry. I would suggest you to add some more moments anyway, because this pairing is quite rare, and is often thrown to the sidelines. My point is that it was below your average rate, and I had expected better. :)

Good luck with the next chapters and keep writing :)
The Burnt Jewel chapter 3 . 11/2/2011
It was so sweet, so innocent, and I loved it a lot. You do know how to express their emotions, so well done :)

I really enjoyed it, and I can't wait for the next pairings, excluding Mikan and Natsume's pair.

Good luck with the next chapters and keep writing :)
pwenie chapter 2 . 10/8/2011
:)) super cute
The Burnt Jewel chapter 2 . 10/8/2011
Hm..another good songfic :)

Keep it up :) Though most people do not like Sumire and Yome's match, the way you expressed it was rather...intriguing...so good job :)

Keep writing and good luck wit the next chapters...i guess maybe the next ones will be Imai and Nogi followed by Anna and Kitsu and Yuu and Nonoko :)
pwenie chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Awww this is the best songfic ish i read :)
Anna Writes chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Its good...
xXxSamXChanxXx chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
So cute, I listened to the song while reading this and it made it cuter.: I lurv this and im gonna go read it over agian. Kkthxbai :D
Mei Vir D. Ripper chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I LOVE YOU LIKE A LOVE SONG BEIBI.! HAHAHA.. XD

OKay.. Now for the real review..

I LOVE THE SONG YOU USED.!

So true... Natsume was definitely in the dark and now her has found the light again.. All thanks to a girl who laughs "heehee"... XD

Why do I remember the word "teehee".? XD

And GO TEAM BLOODY CHEETAH.! XD
ejo chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
It's interesting, but I think it would be better if you used colors to describe the things happening as the story goes in.