Reviews for Forever
Happy person chapter 1 . 1/16
Nami, I broke you
Keep writing stories, your a good writer and hella funny.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
sword king chapter 1 . 1/27/2016
thaks i luved it
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2015
Amazing make of this story's
fandelyraandlance chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
great story!
silvergryphon06 chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
I really enjoyed this! Very sweet. I hope to read more from you, your writing is wonderful! :D
LuffyKun3695 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
I love this pairing. Very fluffy and sexy. We need more LuNa. The *true* pairing in One Piece. :D
moulinrouge32 chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeee LuNa! :3

Love the conversation between them in the beginning, very deep, insightful, and in character. When u said you almost stopped at Nami saying "me too" I had to scroll for forever to see what you meant! Glad you went further than just implied LuNa lol

Just feeling tho that the sex wasn't meaningful enough. Idk, it's just a feeling.

Anywho, good job for your first LuNa fic! :D
Goku's Daughter chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Yaya super cute! Forever~ I want them to be together forever!

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Your writing is good and I enjoyed the read! Keep it up!


GreenCyberWolf chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
So cute and sexy at the same time. I like how you switched between the two parts. First all innocent and then getting into the lemon. Very nice.
MisStory chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
This was such a sweet oneshot. I liked the dialogue and of course the lemon.
SpecialDevil62 chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
You captured Luffy's personality perfectly! You're so cool
Kaoru likes One Piece chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Hey there Asha I totally love your LuNa fics, and the M part was done beautifully-

Keep writing, I sure will read your fics :)!
Tell Me Why People Believe chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I loved it! The only mistake I saw was you spelled bite wrong. You spelled it bight! other than that. Great grammar. No other grammatical errors were saw by me. If there were, I am sorry I didn't see them, but I am sure somebody will. I alway love LuNa stories, so fantastic. '-