Reviews for Fatal Mistake
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
whic book is this
miny-universal chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
so far it is rearly good. you are a good writer and i love the story. can you peace cary on.
Sierra of the Stars chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Good start. I hope you update soon.
K8yx chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Any chance your going to update as i'd really love to find out what happens. The start is excellent and very intiguing. Your writing style is very good, and i like the description. Love the twist at the end. Update soonx
Raina chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
Ah i can feel the tension already. I have a feeling this story is going to be good. Update soon
itsangee chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
oooh, interesting! your writing is very good! i'm looking forward to finding out more, please update soon!

Angelmail x
ablondeinaunionjack chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
First of all - Rat and Anneena! I'm so glad I'm not the only one who ships them! Excellent start, very intriguing - there were a couple of misplaced apostrophes towards the end but otherwise it was very good. Update soon!