|Reviews for Dragon Spiral|
| MarTinez9 chapter 7 . 9/21/2013
When will there going to be an update of this story.
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/30/2013
you could put kira and fem sasuke on his team with anko or kakashi as the sensei
| King of Epic Chaos chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
I am done reading
| jonale.fm chapter 8 . 11/28/2012
... make him team up with hinata, sasuki, kira and the senseis are anko, kurenai and yugao, and make it team 11 or 12
| MarTinez9 chapter 8 . 11/27/2012
Love the story hope you keep it up.
| NARUTO1 chapter 8 . 11/27/2012
just finish reading your story gotta say that i really like it and hope you update it really soon and keep them coming.
| USAVet chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
Okay huge problem. When the person speaking changes, you start a new paragraph. That is common throughout writing and is expected. As it is the story has become a hard to follow amorphous blob of text. Just a bit of work and it will be that much better. Also check how you capitalize speech as well, needs work there too.
| ndavid chapter 5 . 11/25/2012
| ndavid chapter 2 . 11/25/2012
| Veldrisk chapter 7 . 9/25/2012
Very interesting story so far. I look forward to seeing where you take it from here.
| wolfwarrior75 chapter 7 . 8/14/2012
good story so far.
looking forward to the next update.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
yhicouldprobablyhavereadallt hescrunchedupwordsifiwantedt obuticouldntbebotheredcanyou .
so i didnt bother reading the story after it occured.
| pensuka chapter 7 . 8/11/2012
man naruto is a lucky mutt
| Invizabledragon chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
holy jesus fucking mary learn to use the space bar!
| Megatyrant chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
All of the text with the "Bold" format is mashed together, making it an illegible wall of scrambled words and letters. Which makes it very hard to read. Maybe you should take a look at it.