Reviews for Dragon Spiral
V1X3N93 chapter 8 . 4/17
Lol
Peace chapter 1 . 4/2
With this shit, you will never truly peace. You know this, yes?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2
Sometimes I luv 2 stare at the sun wit my eyes an see thistory ther cuz itso guud yes :)
StrongGuy159 chapter 7 . 4/1
Awesome story continue please.
LordGhostStriker chapter 1 . 4/1
why Hinata?
gg chapter 8 . 4/1
yeah well up yours
redwolf23456 chapter 8 . 3/30
Great story so far
MarTinez9 chapter 7 . 9/21/2013
When will there going to be an update of this story.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/30/2013
you could put kira and fem sasuke on his team with anko or kakashi as the sensei
King of Epic Chaos chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
I am done reading
jonale.fm chapter 8 . 11/28/2012
... make him team up with hinata, sasuki, kira and the senseis are anko, kurenai and yugao, and make it team 11 or 12
MarTinez9 chapter 8 . 11/27/2012
Love the story hope you keep it up.
NARUTO1 chapter 8 . 11/27/2012
just finish reading your story gotta say that i really like it and hope you update it really soon and keep them coming.
USAVet chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
Okay huge problem. When the person speaking changes, you start a new paragraph. That is common throughout writing and is expected. As it is the story has become a hard to follow amorphous blob of text. Just a bit of work and it will be that much better. Also check how you capitalize speech as well, needs work there too.
ndavid chapter 5 . 11/25/2012
lpkp
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