|Reviews for Melt|
| Alvar Cunnings chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
I LOVE how these little one shots add together and moreover i love your use of adjectives is beautifu, i have seen little like it. I truly feel like i can see the images clearly as if i was there. Please keep up the good work.
| Gingerbread Owl chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Oh my, this is just so beautiful and delicious. You write from Ciel's perspective so brilliantly that my heart and stomach are twisting along with his. This is a lovely accompaniment to Phobia.
| ulqui's-girl chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Oh yes he will Elizabeth be damned!
| TheGreatChickenbone chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
This was truly beautiful. I loved everything about it. You did a wonderfully amazing job.
| Neneko chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
AND A SEQUEL ALSNVSLNLNBBL NNTHJBNLO N!
That was basically my reaction when I opened your email and followed the link xD
SO MUCH PRETTY!
Ehem, excuse me.
The fangirling aside, I was so excited to read another Phobia-related story from you! It totally made my week 3
I really enjoyed the beginning a lot, I must say! I think you've captured the entire scenery perfectly; the way Lizzy is absolutely obedient to Pris was just like I wanted it to be. Pris, that little manipuilative thing, was beautifully portrayed, her dubious remark at the end of the first part made me snort. Haha, so much like her, really.
And Ciel! I'm so mesmerized by the way you showed that his thoughts are elsewhere, that he's actually happy to have some private time to spend with Sebastian. That made my fangirl-heart beat like crazy 3
Speaking of my heart beating like crazy, you almost killed me with the second part. Seriously. That was... such a tease. Not only a tease, but a tease á la Phobia-style. So mean to hoist me with my own petards, haha xD The dialogue was nothing less but exquisite, Ciel's outfit sounds like something I'm so going to dress him with next time I'll change his wardrobe, and ahhhh, all the touching and butterfly kisses and caresses 333
But my favorite bits were without doubt these:
Sebastian shivering at the sound of Ciel's moaning? SUCH. A. KINK. SEROUSLY. You'll get that in the porn-chapter, haha, but ahhh I'm so happy to read a fic where it is actually described how much he is turned on by Ciel. Normally it's just Ciel getting all horny and needy and stuff, but to have Sebastian show weaknesses is, and yes, I shall repeat myself, SUCH. A. KINK. OMG.
Ciel having dirty thoughts while being touched. My, what a horny- ehem. That was really erotic, it really send shivers down my spine *fans herself* The bit with his calves pressed to Sebastian's backside? SHIVERS. The bit with Ciel contemplating what would happen if they were bare? SHIVERS. The bit with Ciel wanting to Sebastian to kiss him. SHIVERS. EVERYWHERE. DOWN MY SPINE. AND ALL THE WAY BACK UP.
Like I said before, the dialogue. Omg, the part with "Short of breath" was GENIUS. Sebastian, you'll never change, teasing Ciel like this. The pulse-part really made mine quicken, that's for sure.
Ciel moaning. I repeat myself, but ah, it's my own fault. SUCH. A. KINK. Ahhh why do I have so many kinks? D: Perhaps I'm just desperate, haha.
Anyway, Ciel sighing and moaning in Sebastian's ear? That was so mean XD I think I was just like Sebastian in that moment: pleased by the moaning and frustrated because DAMN CIEL you're such a tease!
Ah, and the end. The end was perfect. Them calming down again after their passionate encounter, acting as if nothing out of the ordinary had happened... that is so Phobia, really. I feel kind of bad telling you that it's "Phobia" and stuff, but really, it is so Phobia-canon, you could have been a co-author xD I'm so happy 3333333 That is such a compliment, I wish I could tell you something as precious as you did to me with this fic! x33333
Alright... and now, I shall stop rambling and return to what I've been doing the past thirty minutes: thinking about how I could coax you into writing more beautiful and erotic Phobia one-shots for me! XD
| eternal-butterfly chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
I love this!
Please tell me where i can read neneko's dounjishi/art? I really need to see these.
again amazing work. Please keep it up! Oh and going in faves! :p Xxx
| promocat chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
lovely story with lots of undertones
| Mossclaw3706 chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I can't believe you actually wrote it! 3 I saw the conversation you and Neneko were having, and I got so excited. Ecstatic, really. Your writing is so beautiful (I've been following your works for some time now), and paired up with Neneko's art...it will really make it come alive. *tears up* So beautiful.
Anyways, my thanks to you for writing this...it actually just made my day X1,000 better. 3
One of your adoring readers,
| Nessie-san chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Sorry, I was too lazy to log in to review XD ANYWAY! I understand how Neneko-san inspires you so XD She really is a brilliant artist. This was truly wonderful, and brought out the sentiments of her work beautifully. The scene had just enough passion to let you know that they shouldn't be doing it, and also had enough thought behind it to let you know that THEY know they shouldn't be doing it XD It was orchestrated very well, and had only one mistake! (Although I can't remember where it was...or what it was /) It made me really happy that there was only one mistake XD Awesome job, Afflicted-san -
| Li the Twilight Knight chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
We're going to slowly take over this section with Phobia fanfic, aren't we? XDDD
Beautifully written. _ I love how Ciel wishes so badly for him but still holds himself back.
You are going to send this to Nene, right? XD