|Reviews for Forgotten|
| skyguy.snipsx chapter 11 . 6/24/2013
This is a great story! Write more please?
| How-to-smile-101 chapter 11 . 9/15/2012
Why have you not made more Chapters? I LOVE THIS! Please keep up the awesome work girl!
| TwilightDragonRose chapter 11 . 5/21/2012
really good plot(better than anythin i got). didnt see any errors. and omg its great!
| Yuffie Miki chapter 11 . 4/26/2012
i think this chapter was amazing. you could have had kaoru collapse though and maybe regain a memory. guess u could use that latter to if u want. still great and cant wait for the next chapter
| Madame Penguin chapter 11 . 4/24/2012
I'm sad that I wasn't here since the beginning, but I'm kind of glad I missed the three month wait period. I know how it feels to have school come between English considering I finished my English credits in high school so all I need is a bunch of science for college.
It looks like the story is going to end soon though. All you really need to do is get another scene of Kyouya, a way to get Hikaru back to Japan without parents knowing, finding Kaoru and figuring out a way to finally jog his memory either with Hikaru's appearance or right before he gets there with Himari's help. I can help brainstorm with you if you really need it.
Getting Hikaru over there will be the hardest task though considering plane is the fastest but easily traceable and harder to get by with his passport and security. You could go by boat but make it a cruise, a family friend's yacht, or something that is discreet in their terms considering any other boat probably won't work, but this will take a LONG time to get to Japan.
| xxxMaliceandMiseryxxx chapter 11 . 4/23/2012
They're really falling apart, ne? :O So is Kao sick or just...troubled? Also, Hunger Games wasn't bad, but the camera man was having a seizure :
| ElvenLove chapter 3 . 4/23/2012
Wait, so, is Hika-chan Dead? D: 'cus he hasn't been mentioned in the current tense for a while. D:
| Noa Nee chapter 11 . 4/22/2012
XD yeah I've seen it...twice. And yeah 2 raging twins would cause problems, but! It would put pressure on the parents to bring them together!
| Miss Light Bright chapter 11 . 4/20/2012
SWEET JESUS! I loved this chapter. Hikaru's reaction was great and I love how fragile Kaoru seems. Great job! Please continue soon!
P.S. you must see the Hunger Games!
| Yuffie Miki chapter 10 . 3/29/2012
more! its so amazing its got me obsessed and wanting more.
| PrevalentMasters chapter 10 . 2/5/2012
It's...it's so addicting... More, please? Soon? Thank you.
| Noa Nee chapter 10 . 1/29/2012
Mean mean mean mean mean! This story is great! Here's what I think should happen. Hikaru has to go to his mother or something and demand an explanation. She puts him down calls him crazy and all that jazz (cause she has to be the bad guy) and Kaoru remembers a lot and goes tearing through the house looking for Hikaru. Someone tell him the hikaru is dead and he cries. Then (not sure how) but the two of them end up somewhere at the same time. Then viola happy ending. You get to figure out the details. ;)
| GoPlayInTrafficxox chapter 10 . 1/21/2012
I really love this chapter and no it's not too fast it's just I've been waiting for SOMEONE to realize something wasn't right. Humph Kyo better get Hika home before Kao gets hurt and into a coma. Like he sees Hika and goes into really bad shock
| Miss Light Bright chapter 10 . 1/20/2012
OMG OMG! I fricken love this story! Please continue! I love the way Hikaru reacted to the email about Kaoru! I am just so excited right now. YAY MORE PLEASE
| Vaneffle chapter 10 . 1/20/2012
Ok, I feel sorry for your laptop, your 'a', 'd' and 'x' key, Hikaru's phone, and the wall opposite him.
Don't ask I'm being weird.