|Reviews for What I Wish I Could've Said|
| Jencun chapter 9 . 10/3/2013
Yip yip yip...you should be writing for HH. Much prefer your version of events...lol
| Jencun chapter 8 . 10/3/2013
Ok ok! So that one got me just like the last one..sob sob...
| Jencun chapter 7 . 10/3/2013
This is one of the most moving pieces I've read in a long time...lovely. X.
| craftyjhawk chapter 13 . 9/3/2013
This is exactly how I felt when I watched this ep!
| craftyjhawk chapter 7 . 9/3/2013
Thank you for "fixing" this. I've always hated that Booth back off, even if I do understand why.
| craftyjhawk chapter 2 . 9/3/2013
This is MUCH better than the way Hart & Co. handled this scene. :)
| meekerprincess9778 chapter 26 . 8/18/2013
I always had a problem with the fact that Hannah wanted her sunglasses... Temperance had saved her life...wasn't that the best gift you could receive?
| meekerprincess9778 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
| mendenbar chapter 43 . 12/30/2012
What a turn around. When Booth said he couldn't do it any more, she asked if they could still be Partners and he said yes. Now she says she can't so it anymore and walks away.
| Rangers042376 chapter 43 . 12/27/2012
I can only hope that you continu this! I loved this. Brennan speaking up whn they returned from overseas would have saved her so much pain, even if Booth stayed with Hannah. At least she could have attempted to get on with her life. The first half of season 6 was horrible for Brennan and for the fans. Booth was borderline mean to Brennan and she tried so hard to open herself up. I like your version much better!
| redgirlang chapter 43 . 12/28/2012
Heartbreaking for Brennan!
Excellent portrayal of her feelings & emotions, I felt every one of them.
Ange :-) xx
| daisesndaffidols chapter 43 . 12/27/2012
AAAHHHHH...I was hoping for maybe Booth running after her or something! Please update soon!
| swanscribe chapter 43 . 12/27/2012
Ooh, I just rewatched that ep the other day, this would have been a better ending. Really enjoyed this chapter.
| threesquares chapter 43 . 12/27/2012
Holy cow! Thank god for the TBC. When I saw this in my inbox, I was so happy. I love "what I wish I could've said"! You put so many things right! This one is just taking a little longer to get right, right? (Right?) The way you write Brennan make it so easy to *see* this happening, the interior conversations, the slightly different way they sound when they are out of her mouth. Just wonderful. And even if you do play out the angst and this one doesn't end as happily as some of the others, I still think this is something that could and in my opinion, should have been said. "And, with one final dejectedly sad shake of her head at him..." I LOVE long adjectives turned into adverbs, especially when they apply to Brennan, who would use them. Michele
| dharmamonkey chapter 43 . 12/27/2012
I've always wondered if Brennan coming forward with her feelings after the end of the case, as you show here, would have been more effective than coming forward at their reunion on the Mall at the beginning of 6x1 (the WSRA scenario). Obviously, because of the way you left this (which shtik I've grown to love, by the way, robbing us readers of the closure we crave and leaving us a bit unsettled), we'll never know. But part of me thinks that a big emo-reveal *after* the case, as you've done here, would've had more impact (and/or a higher probability for success) after Booth got settled into the groove of being around her again and got out of his combat-is-a-world-apart mindset.
In any case, I love seeing you peel away the layers of the onion to reveal the raw, potent interior of the mind/heart that is Brennan. In her mind, at this point, she knows what her feelings are—it's the making them known part that's missing. And no one lays that rawness bare the way that you do. No one.
Nice seeing another Brennan take on things from you. Well done.
:-) obligatory review emoticon