|Reviews for Lost Soul|
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/22
Thank you. I really appreciate the ending on your story. If any two characters deserve a happy ending it is Abby and Owen.
| TimelessReader chapter 10 . 11/26/2012
| Lee Kyle chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
Acting like young teens, which is nice to see. How did Owen learn how to fight?
| BigFriendlyGun9000 chapter 10 . 11/21/2011
It was a pretty good story all and all. Great work!
| TorontoBatFan chapter 9 . 11/16/2011
Ah, you love reviews as I do. LOL
I didn't think Abby would have to feed this often. In the film it was implied that she only had to do it once every two weeks, or so. Of course, she's still new to being a vampire in this fic, so she's likely not figured out her exact feeding needs yet.
Also, I don't think she needs to be re-invited in. Once she's been invited in through one entrance she doesn't have to be invited in a second time. (But again, she's still new to all this.)
Nice bit at the end where Abby is surprised Owen would wonder if she actually wants him to with her. I think she's starting to realize that Owen still loving her makes this new life much more enjoyable.
How many more chapters are left? I hope you'll do one where she turns Owen. :-D
| TorontoBatFan chapter 8 . 11/16/2011
I liked how Abby didn't attack until the cop -accidentally- hurt Owen. Then the bloodlust took over and it's all she wrote.
Nice that after Abby kisses him with the blood on her face, Owen then kisses her and even deeper. I've noticed how you've got their relationship subtly progressing in terms of intensity.
Hmmm. They're able to now get into bed without clothing and not have any sort of hesitation or embarassment? I can only guess what would happen if Owen's mother caught them. LOL
And, I love how Owen is so correct in his reasoning for going with Abby. She's clearly the only thing good in his life. Leaving with her would be difficult -and I'm pretty sure Owen realizes that he'll probably be turned sooner or later as well- but letting Abby go without him would be something he'd regret every day for the rest of his life.
| BigFriendlyGun9000 chapter 9 . 11/15/2011
Pretty good setup to their escape. Great!
| BigFriendlyGun9000 chapter 8 . 11/12/2011
Fairly good chapter. Keep it up!
| Lee Kyle chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
I'm interested to see what alternate universe you have entered.
| richierich chapter 7 . 11/7/2011
A nice story so far. Looking forward to more. Thanks.
| BigFriendlyGun9000 chapter 7 . 11/2/2011
I actually just decided to check this out, and its great!
| TorontoBatFan chapter 7 . 11/1/2011
Perfect update for Halloween.
The room scene, where she gets into his bed, was done very well. I noticed how Owen didn't seem to even bat an eye that she didn't have any clothes on. And, he's trying to make her not worry about the blood on her face.
I can imagine school would be miserable for Owen, even if the bullies don't mess with him any longer. After three years of having Abby to hang out with at school, to suddenly not have her would be an unpleasant shock.
Hmmm. So Owen has to decide what to do? I'm guessing he's going to decide to leave with her. :-D
Great chapter. :-)
| SaaraBlitz chapter 6 . 10/26/2011
It's really good so far! Keep up the good work! :D
| TorontoBatFan chapter 6 . 10/25/2011
What an amazingly emotional and heartfelt chapter.
I figured that Owen would be freaked out at first...But his love for Abby would trump everything else.
So, Abby isn't going to actually leave? That's good. Maybe she can relocated to the basement room. If nobody else knows about it, she could shelter there during the day, in a trunk...At least until she and Owen can come up with some better plan.
I'm still betting (i.e. REALLY, REALLY hoping) that the fic ends with Abby turning Owen and them leaving together.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :-D
| chloekodi fan chapter 5 . 10/25/2011
love it love it...when you doing the next chapter i cant wait!need to read more...you are brilliant writer you have talent...right next chapter hehe :-)