|Reviews for Island of the Birds|
| aflackazz chapter 14 . 12/4/2013
Awesome story. Like the au and how you throw the characters in there, like the joker and nick naming the horse the dark knight. Please keep writing!
| AShadeOfHotHead chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
One problem i have with it: the bits of foreign language. The reason behind this is that it's kind of frustrating not knowing what is being said. Especially when all the characters in the scene do. It leaves only the reader out of the loop. This is all my opinion, and I'm not a writer myself but this is what i think as a reader, but i think that only if your writing in the point of view of someone who doesn't know the language that is being spoken is it fine that you write dialogue in that other language. The reason i think this is because it brings us more into it. And unless we too know that language, it gives us the same confused feelings as the reader. We can relate. And your story is brought to a whole other level when we are dragged into the story and when your story starts playing with what we feel. In other news, i think I'm going to like this story. I've only read the first chapter so I'm still testing the waters with it. But i think I'm going to like this. And i can't wait to see where you've already taken it and where you will. :) Happy Writing! Cuz i think i would to see this to the end
Ps. AShadeOfHotHead is my actual username
| Scavenger'sDaughter2 chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
I love how conflicting this story is, Robin is attracted to Slade and wants him but at the same time he doesn't want to leave his home and become a pet. Well done, you are a talented writer:)
| lilbit1016 chapter 15 . 6/10/2013
Omg this its not good...Slade is going to be furious...hate to be the joker lol
| Artemis Fortune chapter 15 . 6/10/2013
Aw man, if Joker ended up that way NATURALLY...oh man
| Shadoween chapter 15 . 6/10/2013
oh my gets even more interesting , can't wait for more
| KitkatMoon chapter 14 . 3/12/2013
Amazing! Got a new follow! PLEASE post Soon
| lilbit1016 chapter 14 . 2/23/2013
Omg this was just wow...I'm sure next chapter is going to be awesome :)
| Artemis Fortune chapter 14 . 2/21/2013
Ouch. Well of course Robin is going to fly the coop if Slade was just holding him back from helping his home!
I can see Slade likes it when Robin RIDES things. ;)
| lilbit1016 chapter 13 . 12/15/2012
Loved it :)
| Aguna chapter 13 . 12/15/2012
| Artemis Fortune chapter 13 . 12/14/2012
"The prude part of the islander's mind recognized that he was being fucked into the ground and his inner sex-god purred in raw pleasure"
now that's one way to get rid of a nightmare ;)
| Squishy Pencil chapter 12 . 12/5/2012
Ohhh this is awesome. I think Robin deserves another punishment. Not only did he yell at his master, but he disobeyed what Slade wanted to do (even if it was for the better). Please update!
| Aguna chapter 12 . 10/10/2012
You know as much as I don't want to see women and childrem killed Slade does have a point doesn't he?
Damn now I know how Robin must feel
Wonderful chapter :D
| MaestroANC chapter 12 . 10/9/2012
Oh no, poor Robin has to learn how to kill, or Slade let him off easy?
It's going to be a big conflict between them, and knowing both of them are hardcore stubborn men, it's going to be quite entertaining to see each other reasoning XDXDXD
Robin use that sexy ass of yours to seduce Slade into pacifism.