Reviews for Do You Remember Me?
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 18 . 2/18/2012
Okay, looks like most things have been solved. Guess that's why there's only two chapters left
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 17 . 2/18/2012
Lol, did Hinata's friends just tell her to give them details about it later when Kiba was standing right there? LOL!
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 16 . 2/18/2012
Now I really wanna know if they were both virgins xD Sounded like Hinata was, but I can't imagine Kiba being it xD?
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 15 . 2/18/2012
They finally declared their love for each other And I love that they did it without words.
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 14 . 2/17/2012
It was pretty clear that they didn't do anything, but hopefully they'll show each other some love and get it over with
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 13 . 2/17/2012
Kibe gotta hurry, 'cause Sai is a charming guy in his own way! He might seduce Hinata and Hinata might use him to get back at Kiba :O
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 12 . 2/17/2012
AW! Sai is so cute and awkward. It's just a shame that Hinata is going to end up with Kiba!
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 11 . 2/17/2012
I wonder how Kiba and Hinata's next meet up will be like?
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 10 . 2/16/2012
Did Hinata even report back to anyone, or are they still looking for Kiba? HAAHAHAHAHAH xD!.. Well, I have no time left today. It's pretty late and I'm going to bed, but I'll read on later

You story is fine so far. Keep up the good work.
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 9 . 2/16/2012
Kiba that idiot! He shouldn't believe that mean girlfriend of his.. I can understand why he believed her, but still, Hinata was the only one he remembered, shouldn't that have something to say? IDOT, KIBA!
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 8 . 2/16/2012
What? Did he find out that they had been boy- and girlfriend?

Or was it something else?
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 7 . 2/16/2012
I thought Kiba couldn't remember anything? Hinata didn't even notice that he remembered her sister and that they had a family company and Hanabi was running it.. Kiba didn't even notice himself?

I can't wait to see what the juicy stuff is xD!
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
He began remembering pretty quickly. That's good, I guess Unless he start remembering that annoying girlfriend of his! He should just forget everything about her. I'm still curious, though, why did he break up with Hinata :O? It's evil of you keep this information to yourself -_-'! Arh! Need to know xD
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 5 . 2/16/2012
Awww, they are cute together They should definitely bring Akamaru over there. He should be able to help Kiba!

I'm a dialogue kind of person, but it's nice to have some descriptions and thoughts to read once in a while. Mostly, you are talking about Hinata blushing or something like that when they are not actually speaking. You could improve by making more descriptions of their feelings, the atmosphere and maybe some background stories or something to fill out the chapter. You chapters will get longer and there won't be too much dialogue that way
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 4 . 2/16/2012
I'm pretty sure you are supposed to use “wider” about a huge smile. Not bigger. And I think you meant that her smile grew wider then before, therefore even should be put in the middle of smile and wider. So it should say “and smiled even wider”..

I really can't imagine Ino and Naruto as a couple xD? It's just so weird.. But it's fun to read about a new pairing. Actually, they fit kinda great together. Since Sakura would always yell and hit him while Ino would probably defend him, giving her a reason to yell at Sakura.. Perfect circle of life, haha xD

I can't wait to see what's going to happen now that he moves in with her! LOVE SPARKS ALL OVER THE ROOM!
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