Reviews for Do You Remember Me?
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 3 . 2/16/2012
You sometimes use adjectives instead of adverbs and you tend to use more words that necessary. For example: “I will help Kiba regain his memory back,” I'm pretty sure you don't need that “back” since it lies in the word “RE-gain”.. You should use it if you had only written “gain”..

Awwww. Kibe just told her she was pretty At least now she knows that he actually means that, since he had no reason to bring it up unless he meant it.

Kiba is a real Don Juan.. I wonder why he left Hinata back then?
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 2 . 2/16/2012
I guess some of her old habits keep coming back xD Don't faint, Hinata, Kiba needs help!

And Kurenai-sensei is really sweet
LoveToTheCucumber chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
ARGH! Spoiler alert, please! I've been spoiled so many times, but now I also know Asuma is gonna die! You should consider noting people before writing something that could be spoiling :(...

The summary really caught my eye and it looks good so far. I like the idea of Hinata being a doctor, I think she would be great. Especially considering her personality
LordSquiggyMcNubbin chapter 20 . 12/21/2011
I loved it ): And the reason for the sad face is that I'm also sad it's over, ha. BUT yes, it was amazing. LOOOOVED it. Great story.
KibaHinaLUV chapter 20 . 12/20/2011
I'm so sad that this story is over! :(

It was so awesome, and for some reason I knew that Hinata was going to get... ya know...


lol, sorry that was annoying, huh?
AspiringAuthor19 chapter 20 . 12/20/2011
Awww! That was such a cute story! Sad that is over!

TTTT BUT it was a good story! Great actually!
KibaHinaLUV chapter 18 . 12/18/2011
You were right, you ARE updating fast.

Hurray! Izumi was told off! lol

I'm going to be sad when this story ends...
KibaHinaLUV chapter 17 . 12/18/2011
Nice chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Okay, there's this one line in the first paragraph that says:

"Beside her lay Kiba Inuzuka, his wrapped around Hinata's waist..."

Um... his what wrapped around Hinata's waist?
Lunatyc chapter 16 . 12/9/2011
KibaHinaLUV chapter 16 . 12/6/2011
Yay, you updated!

Anyways, that was an... interesting... chapter.

Thank you for cutting down on the lemon stuff...

It was cute. :)
KibaHinaLUV chapter 15 . 12/4/2011
Yay! They went on a date and kissed! :) I really hope he doesn't go back to Izumi either... Nice chapter, this really made my day, considering that I'm stuck at home also doing homework on the weekend. I repeat, the weekend!
KibaHinaLUV chapter 14 . 11/23/2011
Whoa... Does anyone else imagine the whole scene going on in their head? Well, that's like the point of all this reading... but SERIOUSLY! I imagine every detail, every emotion, every darn MOMENT of each of these chapters. And their emotions build up into my own emotions! That only happens with stories I really, really, really love! So, great job! And... Haha, I was hoping they did nothing that night! ;D Update soon!
KibaHinaLUV chapter 13 . 11/20/2011
Whoa, you update faaaaaaaaaaaaast! Other than a few misspelled words... great chapter, great chapter! *round of applause* I just love this drama between Hinata, Kiba, Sai, and Izumi. :D
KibaHinaLUV chapter 12 . 11/20/2011
yay! an update! This story is well-written, forgot to mention that... I like how you show their emotions and all. OH... and towards the end of the chapter, I noticed that you wrote: Kiba was being sincere about apologizing to Kiba. uh... did you mean that Kiba was being sincere about apologizing to Hinata? Just pointing it out. Anyways, good chapter!
MewMewExorcist chapter 9 . 11/14/2011
The tensions heating up between Hinata and Kiba! Beautiful story, I'm now a fan of KibaHina! Can't wait for next chapter!
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