|Reviews for Breathless|
| Ash S chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
I just found this story and i think its really good! I know its been a while but I hope one day you decide to update :)
| pnkprincess01 chapter 5 . 7/4/2012
This is a really awesome story!
| 26Pearls chapter 5 . 6/24/2012
I really LOVE this story so far, and I hope you come back to it!
| Marine76 chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
This is actually about how Fanfiction is deleting stories with too much sex or violence. Fanfiction will be losing a lot of readers and authors if this happens. Please take the time read what is below and I promise you the new chapter will be up tonight or tomorrow morning.
Greetings to the fine folk that moderate our site.
Myself, along with many, have been writing and posting on your fine site for years now, some of the better examples of up and coming writers out there are now suddenly finding some of the stories we've come to love at risk of being removed without the chance to even rectify our errors.
It's quite easy to simply add an MA rating, additional filters or even a simple requirement for a free membership to read the stories presented here, and would cut down on hateful anonymous reviews and posts at the same time, so I have to question as to why such a thing, in all this time, simply wasn't added.
If you're worried about falsification of a registration then have an appropriate disclaimer and then there can be no dispute, you took your steps and the PARENTS didn't monitor their children, if that is even your concern. If it is more of a personal view or desire then please at least let people know and give them a chance to remove a story that you and yours find offensive, most people on the site are actually rather cordial when it comes to such requests.
While I cannot say for sure if this letter will even reach those that may be willing to listen, of if it's more akin to a wide spectrum purge in preparation for something bigger, please understand that you are going to be losing a LARGE number of your writers, and thus your income from a lack of readers if there is not some level of action taken to help with this situation.
For those that may agree with this, please feel free to sign on and send this to the support server, maybe we can get some movement on this.
Agato the Venom Host
The Dark Graven
Lord Orion Salazar Black
Kumo no Makoto
Korraganitar the NightShadow
Final Black Getsuga
Masane Amaha's King
Nero Angelo Sparda
bunji the wolf
Rin O' Gen
Rin O' Gen
Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape
If you could do what some other authors have done and post this petition as a temporary new chapter on some of your stories to help spread the word? It would help a lot it's how I found out about this
Also there is a petition running on the change . org website just type in fanfiction in the search bar and sign! PLEASE! THEY ARE APPARENTLY REMOVING FICS WITH EXPLICIT SEXUAL CONTENT AND VIOLENCE!
| AnnechanB chapter 4 . 2/11/2012
I cannot wait till you put more of the story up! You write so passionately and bring such life to your characters and give us so much detail about their feelings and lives its beautiful!
| Pyro'sBest chapter 5 . 2/2/2012
This story has surpassed itself to make it my favourite Jared and Kim of all time, and definitely one of my favourite fanfictions even.
| AnnechanB chapter 5 . 1/4/2012
Love it! Can't wait for more to love!:)
| Evergreen 360 chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
I love this! Your voice is wonderful and I LOVE the intensity between Kim and Jared...keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| DarkFireAngel00 chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
She needs to stop crying all the time. Please upload again soon!
| a french reader chapter 5 . 11/19/2011
O.M.G I like your story
| Cassy-Kay chapter 5 . 11/19/2011
I live this story so much, can't wait for the update.(:
| The all mighty and powerfulM chapter 5 . 11/18/2011
this is a really good fic. cant wait for more :)
| Fan chapter 5 . 11/17/2011
OMG! SO superly Duperly Fantasticaly AMAZING! Please update!
| AccioBeer chapter 5 . 11/17/2011
Love the story so far, I'm a huge fan of Kim & Jared fics.
| darkness7eyes chapter 5 . 11/17/2011
omg i'm dying
this was just amazing. seriously i loved it
i love these moments
Jared's background story is so sad
everything was so good
can't wait for more
hope u update soon :))