|Reviews for The Hole|
| La Pythie chapter 1 . 9/5
Oh dude that was so incredibly good ;_; and suddenly I like this pairing :D the concept of a hole being both a figurative and a literal place was brilliant.
| yaoichallenge21 chapter 1 . 2/3
This is a great story. Very Naruto-verse-ish. Very believable, in a sense. I enjoyed it. It was entertaining. :) Thanks.
| HoneyBee137 chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Messed the FUCK UP but wonderfully sane all at the same time.
Stories like this make me seriously wonder what the hell is going on inside some authors mind's. But it's people like you that fascinate me with your writing the most. So by all means, write on young one! (assuming you're a young one and not some creepy old person or something...)
Yet another one of your stories read, and as always: I applaud you and your marvelous efforts!
| Demoninmysoul chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
| the-guardian-of-the-moon chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
I believe I have just been made into a HidaShika fan. I never read a HidaShika fic before. I'm so glad I read one that was written by you first.
| alfamky chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Whoa, this is awesome!
I'm still short on words equivalent to awesome.
I have never, ever read, or imagined, a hidan/shika pairing. But I was going through your profile, and was determined to read all narusasu one shots...when I came across an unbelievable pairing...and I just had to see how you would make it work.
Cause I know you would, somehow, manage to twist canon in such a realistic way that I confuse the fic with the work of kishimoto himself!
And wow! Dark, angsty, but unbelieveably, shikamaru was in character. At least, I think so. And you made me develop a liking towards Hidan! Not that I disliked him or anything, I just, never thought of him as someone to like.
I can totally see Shikamaru breaking into insanity, and i lik the way you wrote the story, inserted with flashbacks.
On the exterior, Shika's stilllazy, uncaring, yet also a distant unreachable person. The talks with his parents, Hokage, makes everything more easy to accept.
And the part where shika said "help me" ohhhhh~
I like Hidan for his insight of life, you know. But then again, it was your character, your words, so it's your insight I suppose.
Nice fic! Fav as usual!
| XamierTheNobody chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
HOLY CRAP THIS IS AWESOME. I've been rereading the manga and when I read Shikamaru getting revenge on Hidan I instantly loved the thought of this pairing! Thank you so much for writing this! It is amazing!
| BeautifullySleepDeprived chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
This was awesome. You should-well not SHOULD because it's your choice but I'd think it'd be awesome-write more stories with Hidan, cause you write him wonderfully. :D
| Umbrellaboots chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I never thought about these two together before. You make the work really well though. The way you write about it is really dark and unnerving. I really love it when you write like this. Thanks for another awesome fic :)
| TaeMint chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Me loves this so fucking much! It's SO had to find HidanxShika storires out there. But the ones that are there, are purely amazing- Like yours :D
Thank you for this oneshot, I REALLY enjoyed this! :).
| Chair chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I really liked this. It's nice to read from an irrational perspective. Insane people are awesome- and very, very scary.
| lil-miss-tachibanana chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I like, really enjoyed this. Every story that I've read thats had Shika in it, hes the same. A lazy, genious that everybody loves. Which is nice. But to warp him into this, to make him insane, was kinda magical. And for the record, I've never read a Hidan/Shika story either.
I was confused when I first saw the 'new story' update in my email. I figured the only way to get Hidan and Shika to scr3w would be to put them in a AU but apparently not. you can manage in other ways.
Plus I love how they're pretty much completely dependent on each other. It brings out Hidans soft side in my opinion. It feels like there's more to the story than whats given. But I know you're already swamped with other stories so I won't beg. And if anything, I'll use my imagination to figure out whats next.
So either way, I'll definitely favortie this story b/c I loved it so much as is.
| XxXaishiteruXxX chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Hidan x Shikamaru is certainly not a pairing that has ever crossed my mind, but you make it work. I love the feel of the fic, the philosophical, angsty tone that permeates throughout the entirety. I was tempted to finish it right before the lemon, which is where I assume you ended it on DA, but I'm glad I didn't. Although the fic can easily be ended there, the slowness and the welcoming of pain adds to the angst and to the idea that they are stuck immortal, and there is nothing they can do about it.
Now to do three assignments on ethics :S With the unethical idea of raising someone from the dead in my mind...this should be interesting :S
| usilang chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
I love it! This pairing is so unexpected yet you're able to weave a scenario where such a pairing could be possible. Although, I know that it's only one-shot, I can't help but wonder what would happen if you make this story into a long one. It would be interesting how the things would unravel as the two begin their acceptance with their dependency with each other.
| Ruka-x3 chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Wow, I really really liked this. I think you did a fantastic job with it. The characterization and plot of this story were just genius. Another amazing piece :)