Reviews for You, Me and Veela Genes
Drarry4eva chapter 5 . 4/23
The songs during the kisses are actually, kind of unnecessary. I'm not throwing a flame, it's just kind of irritating. I do like this, it's just the lyrics, there doesn't need to be a song during every kiss or sex scene, if you did do one.
Drarry4eva chapter 4 . 4/23
I don't get that, Harry saying he doesn't get why women get so sentimental? Hermione is crying, everyone makes her cry in stories, like they see her as a wheepy crybaby, anyways, it's not sentimental, it's overly emotional. Other than that I quite like this story.
KeikoHPfan chapter 5 . 4/16
There is an entire paragraph of this chapter (5) that comes from Cheryl Dyson's "Order of Merlin" fanfic. I rather doubt you have her permission for using her words, it's not cool...
vickstaroo7 chapter 21 . 3/21
This story was awesome! You are a fantastic writer
platinum.and.raven chapter 21 . 3/16
You had me hooked from beginning to end! Thank for such a great fic!
Guest chapter 21 . 3/11
Though this story had a wonderful plot, your grammar needs improvement. Keep trying and good luck on your next fic.
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 7 . 1/21
A bit sappy but cute
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 2 . 1/21
You have to lover Hermione and her way with animals and men.
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 1 . 1/21
I think Malfoy being powerful enough to be the next dark lord is stretching it a bit.
yokishko chapter 11 . 12/29/2014
I just really had to say that if you want to say "fairy of power" then the correct title is "diwata ng kapangyarihan" or if gender specific you can use enkanto for male and enkantada for female instead of diwata.
Jane Slytherin chapter 4 . 11/3/2014
Holly Crap. I'm sorry. Honestly. T_T
I really like the turn your story is taking scenariowise, and even though I find your Harry a bit too stubborn for good sense, I would love to read the rest of it but I couldn't even finish reading this chapter. I'm really sorry darling, but if you want to write stories in English, you'd really need someone to beta-read for you. This chapter is really painful to read, sorry.
Keep me posted if you ever have it beta read please? Because I do like your story so far.
Lady Nalaa chapter 6 . 7/14/2014
Ok I start chapter 6 but had to stop.
He started out going to calm his Draco, then you step it to the great hall? WTF?
mrs. prongs chapter 5 . 6/30/2014
Oooo...I am all wet...really hot fic...I looovd it...
here again chapter 18 . 6/30/2014
I loved ur plot an had two betas then why so many grammar mistakes I don't get it...
but neglect the mistakes ur fic rocks! I loved reading battle chapter. ...very well done and very interesting too...
tat5934 chapter 2 . 6/24/2014
Oh my...! What a kiss!
And poor Harry! Everyone's chasing him!
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