Reviews for You, Me and Veela Genes
warden chapter 9 . 1/16
Oh my god...superb fic...loved it so far...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
I don't mean anything by it, but were there different writers involved in writing this story? Because the style completely changes after the first few chapters.
1Hpfanfiction chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
nice but harry wouldn't have given up like that at least make him yell at dumbledoor for saying it was for the greater good and have harry say I still have a life of my own and I have already did things for the greater good and It's time for me to do things and think things for myself and I will not do things just for the"greater good " I think this meeting is over.
Guest chapter 15 . 10/2/2015
Loved your fic...story is great...
ray chapter 9 . 5/16/2015
Wonderful fic...loved it so far...
claire1663 chapter 21 . 5/10/2015
Thank you for your fic.
atlantis51 chapter 6 . 5/7/2015
This is a good story, except for your tendency to use the wrong words!
Drarry4eva chapter 5 . 4/23/2015
The songs during the kisses are actually, kind of unnecessary. I'm not throwing a flame, it's just kind of irritating. I do like this, it's just the lyrics, there doesn't need to be a song during every kiss or sex scene, if you did do one.
Drarry4eva chapter 4 . 4/23/2015
I don't get that, Harry saying he doesn't get why women get so sentimental? Hermione is crying, everyone makes her cry in stories, like they see her as a wheepy crybaby, anyways, it's not sentimental, it's overly emotional. Other than that I quite like this story.
KeikoHPfan chapter 5 . 4/16/2015
There is an entire paragraph of this chapter (5) that comes from Cheryl Dyson's "Order of Merlin" fanfic. I rather doubt you have her permission for using her words, it's not cool...
vickstaroo7 chapter 21 . 3/21/2015
This story was awesome! You are a fantastic writer
platinum.and.raven chapter 21 . 3/16/2015
You had me hooked from beginning to end! Thank for such a great fic!
Guest chapter 21 . 3/11/2015
Though this story had a wonderful plot, your grammar needs improvement. Keep trying and good luck on your next fic.
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 7 . 1/21/2015
A bit sappy but cute
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 2 . 1/21/2015
You have to lover Hermione and her way with animals and men.
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