Reviews for People Imprisoned By Destiny
Guest chapter 3 . 10/19/2012
dreamz1107 chapter 3 . 10/4/2012
Cant wait for the update
MewMewLissa chapter 3 . 7/15/2012
Nice chapter
senseijordan chapter 3 . 7/12/2012
amazing amazing AMAZING! i love how you have finnally intraduced the main conflict with out like spilling it all their is still secerets to learn. im instreted in what is soo special about her and what is up with him
F3ARTH3RIPP3R chapter 3 . 7/6/2012
He'll yes! U've updated! Thank u thank u thank u!
;) u totally understand! The whole "I must make her mine" thing is the basis to nearly if not all of my romance stories! And urs is turning out to be really awsome! I even giggled at all of ur references cuz I recognize them ALL.
Ahoyanchorsaway chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
I really like this story and your writing style, can't wait for the next chapter.(:
Guest chapter 3 . 7/4/2012
This story is awesome ! keep writing, this is great :D
TsukiyoNoMarionette chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Sooooo HOT!
TsukiyoNoMarionette chapter 3 . 7/4/2012
OMG! That was so nice!
Jemstone6259 chapter 2 . 5/2/2012
Jemstone6259 chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
I like it there's a lot of details
Senseijordan chapter 2 . 4/17/2012
Why why must perfection turn stalker! But love how you play his character. Can't wait for the next cjapter
kitty.0 chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
Ikuto's parts seemed so sweet in this chapter. I really liked reading this. Please update as soon as possible.
kitty.0 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
I like all the anime character and convention talk in this. I like reading this story, I can't wait to read chapter 2 ;)
Ravage16 chapter 2 . 11/5/2011
Amazing, great sentence structure and build up. I love it and can't wait to read more. I would though, suggest, adding a bit more detail of the surrounding, like maybe if there where colorful lights at the bar or the flavor of the drink. Maybe about what the bed looked like or if there were windows, for example,

( Dragging Utau behind me into the thundering bar, the music flooded out as we got our cards out and were ushered inside. Bright neon lights from the dance floor reflected off the well polished cherry wood bar table top, as the bartender kept his back to us. The faint sound of alcohol being shaken with fruity liquids, mixed to perfection. )

See how much of an ideal view the reader gains? Your story is still amazing though, keep up the good work.
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