Reviews for DAlliances
playswithworms chapter 4 . 1/3/2012
Many thanks to femme4jack for reccing & linking this! Amazing and such a brilliant explanation of the Unicronians, and Hot Rod being exactly who he needs to be to fight/distract and maybe heal Galvatron ("by the power of the Matrix" *sporfle*), and the Unicronians fighting in their own way for freedom, and Danny and his reaction when he learns the truth was just marvelous. Also - I love your First Aid here very much :D
femme4jack chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
Aged up Daniel is a rarely seen, precious and beautiful thing in this fandom that is swiftly becoming my deepest fandom longing. This chapter satisfied that longing in all the best ways possible.

It had the bittersweet quality of two people who truly were, in their own ways, childhood friends, and who, despite so rarely getting to spend time together, still mean so much. Roddy's difficult explanation, and fears of how his alien friend will react, was beautifully handled, especially with the fishing line on the fingers illustration. And then Daniel pulled that stunt with the fishing line, and I cried. I honestly cried. It was just that perfect.

Thank you so much for writing such a thing of beauty and sharing it. I'm just... beyond words, and will be reading this one over and over again.
femme4jack chapter 3 . 12/7/2011
OMG, I couldn't give this an adequate review last night because I was just so gobsmacked and grinning like a fool and happy inside and all that would have come out was some Bluestreak ramble of pure glee.

I'll try to be more coherent now. This, dear author, is made of pure win! Everything from the rental hall and insurance agreements, to Swindle and others trying to explain things to the Unicronians, to Cyclonus finally understanding... that he couldn't understand... and having yet one more reason to resist Unicron and be loyal to Megatron with pain that feels like love!

And then Roddy and Galvatron. Just PURE WIN! With First Aid standing by handing instruments and lubrication and OMG it was just the best scene ever.

And as cracky as it could be, it still had the realistic feel because you have explained so convincingly what is different about the Unicronians. Just f-ing brilliant! And then Roddy, of course, would come up with Sadomasochism as the perfect response to this! I've long had a guilty love for Roddy/Galvatron SM, but the logic here is inescapable and just pure win.

It is criminal, how few reviews this story has. Please, I beg you, tell me it has SO MANY MORE on LJ or Ao3? Because I need to recommend the hell out of it. Not that I feel strongly about this or anything, and I haven't even reviewed the last chapter yet, which I swear, cured me pneumonia with the power of love.
femme4jack chapter 2 . 12/6/2011
It is delightful reading this for the second time, and well worth the second read. I too want to tremble with the pbots considering the implications of how Galvatron is built (and SO MANY KUDOS to you for coming up with that!), and then there is Roddy taking an intuitive leap and showing exactly why he is now the Prime. 33333
femme4jack chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
I'm certain I've read this before, but it came up on the season 3 comm and had to read it again. I do believe that Daniel fics are my very favorite genre, and this one captures every bittersweet thing I love about them. That Rodimus quietly agreed that he wished so, too, just made me get teary.

And then there are all the other lovely images of a toddler napping on Blaster's lap, Sideswipe's ridiculous antics and Sunstreaker's righteous indignation over that, and the BIG MISTAKE and everyone's reactions to that.

Yes, I know he witnessed the equivalent of porn, but somehow, it seems like something far more beautiful rather than base that he saw. 33333
kaiiju chapter 4 . 10/16/2011
Autobots? Hoooooo? *dies*

I really think that you covered a lot of issues in these two chapters. Because not only did you explain to Daniel, you really did explain to me too. I sort of pursued that line of though tentatively, but I never got to that sort of incredible depth. Wow.
Illucien chapter 2 . 10/3/2011
Very amusing! Well written and the theories were very interesting indeed.
Starfire201 chapter 2 . 10/3/2011
Interesting drabbles. I liked your theories about Galvatron's body. Made a lot of sense.