|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Grangers take on the world|
| x chapter 1 . 3/2
My, we can certainly tell you had no interest in writing THIS part, anyway. The 'feel' of it was something like a cat on a hot tin roof - fast and jumpy, touching ground as little as possible.
| sanabalis chapter 33 . 3/2
Miles Vorkosigan? Someone's a fan of Bujold. Just like me! Nice story, btw!
| redrose3443 chapter 10 . 2/16
there have often been cases of missing words and of incorrect sentence structure. t has not happened too much to the point where i can't read or make out the sentences, but it has been a bit distracting. you might want to come back to your earlier chapters and correct these problems.
but the story is interesting so far, though it is weird having neville not be a close friend to harry and hermione, but...eh. it's your story.
| diamondluver67 chapter 1 . 2/15
You know they should have let tom riddle live
| CaBuckeye chapter 50 . 2/13
You have a wonderful plagiarism check going here. You have been consistent in all previous chapters with conservation where you really mean conversation. Same number of letters, almost the same spelling. Great way to check to see if someone has outright cut/pasted your story.
| CaBuckeye chapter 45 . 2/13
Brava! That is one quidditch game that I would have given my last galleon to see!
| CaBuckeye chapter 25 . 2/12
"Hagrid is a prawn to be used..." I almost spewed my cola all over my keyboard!
Excellent pun given that a prawn is of the larger members of the shrimp family. Calling a half-giant a shrimp is a thumbs-up. hehehe.
| CaBuckeye chapter 12 . 2/12
Wow, since the retirement of Headmaster Dippet in 1945/46 you mean to say that there has never been a wizarding child bitten by a werewolf before or since Remus? That no precedence was ever set by this action. That no honor was permitted/used by Remus's graduation from Hogwarts. That Greyback, who the wizarding world knows just loves to bite children. I thought that Remus was the "intelligent" one; he should have figured out that he was being used-for the ahem "Greater Good", of course.
| petros308 chapter 61 . 2/8
I feel that you were way too harsh on Ginny, pranks and other embarrassing things is one thing but expulsion and a criminal record is another. In your story so far the only thing that she did was be complicit in potioning up Harry in the future, that will never happen and having an unhealthy attachment to Harry. The other "bad actors" in the future have done things in the present to deserve such abuse. There are a few that make Harry and hermione just seem petty and cruel. Neville is a weak character but instead of trying to shore up his weaknesses, they abuse him. There is no chance for any change for them. it looks like you are bullying the characters. H&H are trying to make a better world, which you are writing very well and I like that bit but the whole chamber of secrets arc was planned with Ginny as the scape goat, which she had no part of. If she had try to slip a love potion or done some thing in the present to deserve having her life utterly ruined. I feel pity for her fate, but it is already written and will not be changed. I would like for the pair to perhaps show some regret at a future date, you know, like unintended consequences.
| Shannon Dee chapter 64 . 2/1
A little rough in places but still an enjoyable story.
| redkama chapter 63 . 1/25
well it kicked ass till the very last line then died on the table
| Oogies4u chapter 64 . 1/26
oh my ..gggggggg what a cliff hanger ... :( hope you update soon
| kami god shimigami chapter 15 . 1/16
it was a finger not a toe
| crvenashkorpija chapter 64 . 1/6
When is the next instalment?I just love this story...maybe you should add some song(in whole lyrics) from Green Day,as anti-Damby,like Platypus,or ha,ha you're dead...just my taught...
| tkepner chapter 23 . 12/27/2013
Strike prices in the past for stocks are always normalized to the current day stock price. Microsoft was NEVER under $40. A share and split 1- for -2 whenever it exceeded $100 for the first four years it was out, which happened five times.