Reviews for Harry Potter and the Grangers take on the world
Jael73 chapter 12 . 9/5
I was really liking the story until this chapter. Jinxing Snape once, fine. But Harry knows Snape’s story - and yet is willing to be the man’s bully just like his father? And then to give him permanent dementia? Sorry, but that’s a bit gross. I didn’t see your Harry and Hermione as evil. Now, it feels like they’re only using their knowledge for personal gain and revenge. :(
Alwin-nl chapter 12 . 8/31
Doug needs to go. He’s getting greedy - to the point of demanding money instead of it going to orphans. Obliviation would be suggested.
Alwin-nl chapter 7 . 8/31
Your writing style makes me feel are severely dyslexic. Your beta isn’t doing a very good job.
Gear master chapter 3 . 6/30
I do hope that the spelling gets better
BlindFaunusGirl chapter 64 . 4/14
Interesting story, hadn't expected the twist this chapter. I hope you continue the story at some point in the future.
hunzbookwyrm chapter 64 . 3/7
Great story . hope to see more of this story!
Vance McGill chapter 25 . 12/19/2022
An invisible coat might be better than a Cloak of Invisibility. Might be easier to wear, actually.

Except... is an invisible coat like the Invisible Book of Invisibility? Can you even see the coat at all? If so, poor Neville. Getting a Christmas gift from Dumbledore that he can't even see. Hmm...
Vance McGill chapter 4 . 12/19/2022
"his invisible cloak" instead of Cloak of Invisibility.

Yes, I am sure at the time of writing this (2011), you definitely needed a beta for this story. If it was written now, I am sure you would be much improved in your writing and plot :)
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Anitaxp chapter 64 . 10/15/2022
This was a wild ride tbh.. It was entertaining but sometimes it was extremely out of it lol. Either way I enjoyed it so thank you for sharing?
TennysonPoet chapter 19 . 9/24/2022
I have given this up. To others I wish you well. Enjoy
TennysonPoet chapter 17 . 9/24/2022
You and your beta missed a whole bunch a grammatical errors as well. Makes it harder to read. You keep getting Doug and Dave mixed up and honestly Doug is such a git.
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Faded Dreams chapter 5 . 6/17/2022
Okay, this is unreadable. Half-sentences are bad enough. Missing important words, others are used totally wrong, and jumps between past and present tense add to the chaos. But what clinched it for me was your use of "vilify" instead of "verify". Learn the language and try again! And Dumbledore would never say YEAH. Let me guess, you are a young American?
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