Reviews for Harry Potter and the Grangers take on the world
tricorvus chapter 21 . 4/11
I see that the writing is getting better with each chapter. I see that it's not that you're a non-native-English speaker, so much as you seem to have a reading disability of sorts. So do I and my husband, so all criteria of that nature is hereby withdrawn. We all have demons to struggle with.
No matter what, this is a damn good story.
Great chapter
Rock on
tricorvus chapter 9 . 4/10
great chapter
rock on
tricorvus chapter 8 . 4/10
Damn good.
I don't know if I'm the only one who's noticed this or not; but every fanfiction i've ever seen has treated Amelia Bones, kindly. I have never seen Amelia-bashing in the 4 years I've been on the internet. And quite frankly don't want to see it. She was not very well fleshed out in the canon of the books, but everyone seems to be of one mind, what she should be in fanfiction. :D
rock on!
tricorvus chapter 7 . 4/10
I am sticking with this story because it's good despite spelling (not really an issue) and grammar (meh, I've seen worse). Your biggest problem is the English syntax and sentence structure. I grew up with a Belgian grandmother and a Cherokee mother, so I can read and understand without any trouble.
Great chapter, great story
rock on
tricorvus chapter 6 . 4/10
oh you wicked, wicked thing you!
This is great
rock on
tricorvus chapter 5 . 4/10
oh my god I love it. Especially the "come clear my name, look how innocent I am" bits XD
Rock on
tricorvus chapter 4 . 4/10
This chapter was sheer genius, especially the library bit at the end
Rock on!
tricorvus chapter 3 . 4/10
wicked awesome. I see you're in Australia, but your syntax seems to feel German to me. It's just that you read like you're not a native English speaker. Believe me, it's not a deal-breaker, just something I noticed. Great chapter, great story
Rock on!
tricorvus chapter 1 . 4/10
wicked righteous. I find no errors. This is exactly the kind of story i was looking for, today. Bash everyone but Harmony XD
Rock on!
hpfanscs chapter 64 . 3/26
A long but interesting read. it would be nice to finally get to Tom Riddle.
fanficfan75 chapter 64 . 3/12
What if to get future Ron off their back if they hypnotize Ron and some girl that he hates in all timelines, that next time in his sleep to marry her and using the phrase till death do us part and because in this timeline Hermione's marriage never happened she is not bound by it
x chapter 1 . 3/2
My, we can certainly tell you had no interest in writing THIS part, anyway. The 'feel' of it was something like a cat on a hot tin roof - fast and jumpy, touching ground as little as possible.
sanabalis chapter 33 . 3/2
Miles Vorkosigan? Someone's a fan of Bujold. Just like me! Nice story, btw!
redrose3443 chapter 10 . 2/16
there have often been cases of missing words and of incorrect sentence structure. t has not happened too much to the point where i can't read or make out the sentences, but it has been a bit distracting. you might want to come back to your earlier chapters and correct these problems.

but the story is interesting so far, though it is weird having neville not be a close friend to harry and hermione, it's your story.
diamondluver67 chapter 1 . 2/15
You know they should have let tom riddle live
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