Reviews for Harry Potter and the Grangers take on the world
ceo55 chapter 2 . 10/4/2011
I just found this delightfully good story! I am looking forward to more of your thoughts and ideas for this rather different plot line! Keep up the good work!

ceo55
starboy454 chapter 2 . 10/4/2011
excellent update
loretta537 chapter 2 . 10/4/2011
this sounds like it could be a good story, however i do see a few problems with it.

first a large part of the story has no interaction and is jus saying that such and such happened.

second how do they have items from the room of lost things to sell when they havent been to hogwarts to get the items?

third why doesnt harry get the curses recorded and removed (along with problems from being at the dursleys) so that he can take legal action and even put in the papers about the spells on him.

fourth does harry check at gringotts to see if any money has been taken from his account and what his parents wills said?

fifth are there really things that have been left to harry and if so what does he do with them?

sixth please dont forget that harry can get lawyers to work for him (maybe get sirius released) and the press on his side (poor little orphan boy sent to abusive relatives (did the dursleys have spells on him, where did his parents wills say he was supposed to go) by the nasty headmaster who put a bunch of spells on him and stole his money, how many others did the headmaster treat this way ect
kelnom chapter 2 . 10/4/2011
good chapter, keep up the great work.
narutodragon chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
seems a little rushed but a great first chapter please update soon
Zicou chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Looks like a great beginning :)

I hope to read more soon so...

COntinuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuue,

Z.
Rubicon373 chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
interesting

update soon please
annependragon chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Great start, love it
kelnom chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
interesting idea, waiting for the next chapter.
etfrompo chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Great start. A very different way of Harry and Hermione getting together. Look forward to seeing what new twists you come up with
starboy454 chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
look like a good start to your story
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