Reviews for Undisclosed Desires
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Going through some things and realized I'd never reviewed. How is this possible? :-) Love Jasper and Peter and love this o/s. So hot!
Melendine chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
good
tsmacker chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Love myself some "Dirty Talking Jasper". Also love Jasper and Peter together.
TwilightAddict71484 chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
i think i may be getting addicted to gay male porn...well only if its Jasper and Peter that is! they are so yummy!
thepinktabby chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
*grin* I like this story too! HEHE, Peter and Jasper such a sweet pairing, one of my favorites too!

Thanks for the great read. ;)
featherme chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Well fuck me and call me Nancy...that was hot. I loved this pairing. Dirty talking Jasper is always a win in my book.

Thanks for writing!
HaleYeah just cbf logging in chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
This is my fav pairing ever and always will be, not to mention i LOVE dom/sub relationships! You completely made my day, my week even! Thank you!

and um... pretty please could you write more maybe? Anything at all with these guys? Please?

I'll give you a Jasper sunae! With sprinkles!
Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
love it

:p
Grizzo chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Love the kink. Glad Peter owned up to his feelings...thx...gr
mrsbeas chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
So hot, bb!
VAVikingGirl chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
When I read your summary, I thought, "I've read this story before." I read the fic, and "Yeah, I've read this." When I got to the a/n at the bottom, then I said, "Ahhhh, the Dirty Talking Jasper contest." That has to be one of my fav of the contests. There was a goodly number of slash fics and they were good.

Here's my prev review: This was a very hot fic. I liked how Jasper warned Peter that he likes things a bit rough. Looks like Peter does too.

I still love this story, and love your work. I'm so glad you have such a pervy mind. :)
HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
ooooh! gotta love the aggressive dirty talkin Jas! Loved the pairing hun, and boy *fans face* that was some seriously hot lovin! Great oneshot sweets xxxx
bbbluez chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Love it!
sunystone chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
I loved the paring! All those years they spent lusting after each other could have been spent shagging each other if only they had said something sooner! Great story!
edwardsisobel chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Dear Sam, beta'ing this gem was no hardship at all! Love this pairing and a dirty talking rough loving Jay is HOT! loved it.

Suz xx
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