|Reviews for Blue Sky|
| Sanluris chapter 1 . 10/3
I'm really in love with this story. I have been reading it almost non-stop since I found it. You write so well and intelligently. This is the kind of genre I expect to be difficult to write for...it's complex and really deep and detailed. Reading your story, I realize I really, really love the characters almost to the point of it being painful...and I haven't felt that for many things before, let alone characters from a video game. For that reason your story is both difficult and easy to read. I want to find out more about what happens, but I almost can't bear to go to the next chapter for fear of something awful happening to the characters. That might sound bad, I don't know, but it's reI'm really in love with this story. I have been reading it almost non-stop since I found it. You write so well and intelligently. This is the kind of genre I expect to be difficult to write for...it's complex and really deep and detailed. Reading your story, I realize I really, really love the characters almost to the point of it being painful...and I haven't felt that for many things before, let alone characters from a video game. For that reason I almost can't bear to read the next chapter, for fear of seeing something awful happening to the characters, but I want to so I can see what they're all going through. I don't know if that sounds bad or good but it's good.
One last thing: I like making long descriptions to explain things in stories I write but I always am afraid that I'm rambling and doing too much telling and not enough showing and that no one cares because it's boring, or I'm boring and bad at explaining. I love all the explaining you do though. It works great. It's just right, I think, for a story and characters like this. Especially for Chell, and definitely for Wheatley. I love hearing about them and what they're thinking. You handle their characters so well.
| mhsrva chapter 1 . 9/29
its my life
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/28
I will never get over the beauty of this fanfic
| WOWW THO chapter 15 . 9/20
i never.. ever thought in a million years i'd be this impressed and moved by a portal fanfiction. ever. it was.. jesus? i dont even know how to describe how fucking GOOD it was! how GREAT it was!
i absolutely.. loved it... oh my GOD. i never wanted it to end! ! !
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/14
Okay we're to start. BEST PORTAL FANFIC EVER! I just loved it. Kinda wished we got a bit more narrative on how everyone in the town of Edean, sorry if I misspelled it, is doing. Either way it was great. I really hope you plan on making a bit of a sequel to this, like about how every ones doing, how Chell and Wheatley's relationship is doing, do they get married, do they end up having a kid (can't seem to find any fics like that anywhere), or was there already a pretty obvious hint a sequel is underway? In this other sequel will Chell find out that Caroline is her mom and save her too? Love the way you played that in. Hope I don't sound to demanding or anything I'm just really hoping for a sequel. If you don't plan on making one though, no pressure. Again awesome story, keep doing what your doing.
| ArtofthePlate chapter 1 . 9/11
Ok, I just finished this chapter of the audiobook podcast, and it was amazing. Where's the rest?
| Raine chapter 15 . 9/8
I just loved this story there are no words to describe how much I love it, it was just astonishing.
| some female chapter 15 . 9/3
I am a very slow reader, but this story kept my interest from beginning to end. To those out there working on the podfic, please, take your time and do it right: get it done. There aren't words to explain my many thanks to WafflesGuppies. 9/3/2015 Thank you.
| Zadwon chapter 15 . 9/3
Love the story. I now know what the turret sings!
Turret song in english:
this is my gift for you
valuable for science
when away you remember me
My only lost
My daughter, oh ciel
this is my last gift for you
he is not what I would have chosen exactly
a two meter idiot for a son
frankly they deserve better
but it's your choice
long live Google translate.
| Theonethatwillalwayscry chapter 15 . 8/26
This is the best fanfic I have ever read! I cried almost every chapter! You are truly a great writer!
| Theonethatwillalwayscry chapter 9 . 8/11
I just threw out my tenth tissue on this chapter alone
| Minkparrot chapter 15 . 8/11
why was this so good. Amazing.
| Salamiac chapter 15 . 8/2
Wow. Just.. Wow. I don't have words. I just.. Wow. Okay, enough with the wow, I need to find actual words for this last review, 'cause you deserve them. I love this story. I really, REALLY love it. As said, it made me feel the whole scale of emotions: happiness, sadness, fear, anger, a little bit of insanity (I almost brake few plates and my hand when I told my friends about this story after the chapter 12. Really made me loose my mind, that one.) and love, around with other, smaller feelings. Goosebumps and butterflies, also 'as-said-before'. I don't remember the last time a story made me feel this much, both physically and mentally. Your writing style really makes the world and characters alive, I'm having a little author jealousy here. The plot is unique and amazing, with all the big and small things, good and bad, twirling around their own paths and finally forming a breathtaking, heart stealing wholeness. Thank you, for this story. It'll stay in my heart as one of those I pick up again and again, so I can live it "one more time" and fall in love again. So, with a smile on my face, I say, whole-heartedly: Thank you.
| Salamiac chapter 12 . 7/31
This chapter is making me crazy. It's been over two hours when I first read it and now I have read the ending at least four times and omg my brains are melting, I've been fighting back the urge to start yelling and ranting and screaming on this review box.. Good job, making me feel all the emotions of the emotion scale with this fic. If this makes me cry in the end.. No, no, no, don't want to think that far. I'll have to take a brake, again, to collect my emotions and try to find my sanity. Phew..
| Salamiac chapter 11 . 7/30
Okey, so I was wrong: it got happier. I had a stupid smile on my face trough the happiest parts and, again, little butterflies flying around my belly. I'm loving this so much, thank you. Tho, the name of the next chapter is pretty.. unsettling. Do I dare to go forward? Of course I do, and even if I didn't, I would do it anyway. This is TOO GOOD!