Reviews for Blue Sky |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing and characterization is brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loled at the manly bagle. Glad he understood that aperture is not to be gone near. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Phew! Glad they've escaped. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh poor Wheatley |
![]() ![]() ![]() That. Was. Awesome! I only have one question: WHAT ON EARTH DID SHE FIND!? |
![]() ![]() so glad I found this |
![]() ![]() Pretty cool. I always wanted portal fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’d heard the stories about this fic but I didn’t truly believe it. Now here I am, marveling in your greatness. This is the fic to end all fics. A perfect end to the portal world and I LOVE IT |
![]() ![]() just a note for future reference, here's the translation of the song (according to google translate): My darling This is my gift for you Oh precious Precious for science When you are distant memories of me My only lost My daughter, oh Ciel This is my last gift for you He is not the one I would have chosen exactly An idiot two meters for a son-in-law ('an idiot two meter son-in law' I assume) Frankly they deserve better But it is your choice My darling it's your life... |
![]() ![]() I really want to thank you for have done this masterpiece! I don't know english perfectly ('cos I'm not English speaker) but I really love this fanfic. I love portal and searched about the game I've ended here reading your work. I've just finished to read it and I'm really glad for that, altought there was words that I wasn't able to understand but was a excellent experience. I love how you develop all the story's characters, including those doesn't exist in the game... You should write a sequel about the Chell and Wheatley relationship. Thank you very much! |
![]() ![]() You know, there are fics you read that fill in missing moments of a plot, and they're stellar. I've only ever read two fics that take an ending of a plot and expand upon it to create something that is both homage and IMPROVES upon that ending. This is obviously the second. Every single character, from OC to official character, fits their characterization and the world around them. From beginning to end you nail Wheatley, GLaDOS, the experimental robots, expand upon Chell, and create a whole town of genuinely delightful people. Your premise and plot just... can't be beat, man. You make everyone work for their growth, which makes every victory feel earned. Plus, you give them their victories! We get our happy ending! I can't thank you enough for that. You've inspired me to replay Portal 1 and 2, obviously, but even more than that? You've inspired me to create. To try writing fanfic of my own. I'm so glad I could read this stellar, stellar fic. [GET IT STELLAR BECAUSE SPAAAAAAACE] |
![]() ![]() oh. oh please save them, please |
![]() ![]() I LOVE CHELL I LOVE WHEATLEY I LOVE FOXGLOVE BEST |
![]() ![]() OH. HELP. |
![]() ![]() AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THE ACCEPTANCE OF WHEATLEY! TALKING ABOUT WHAT BROUGHT HIM TO GARRET! SOFTNESS YES |