|Reviews for Shot Down|
| Justa fan chapter 2 . 2/21
Please please please continue dying of curiosity
IF I DIE ITS YOUR FAULT KAY.? So please continue i might die
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
Is that the only reason? Red, Yellow is a Pokedex Owner she can handle it. Haven;t they been through a lot of danger together. Besides every dexowner would be an enemy to Team Rocket. Geez guys and their narrow minds.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Why did you reject her Red?! Why?! It's obvious you like her! What's so damn important to break poor Yellow's heart?! TT.
| n chapter 2 . 11/23/2012
i dont like it I LOVE IT! it one of the best fanfic yet!
| XxxPuppylove12xxX chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
Le gasp! *announcers voice* "What will happen to Red? Who is that mysterious man? Will Red really confess to Yellow? What will happen during Red's trip? Find out next time on Shot Down!"
| roselue chapter 2 . 10/23/2011
you know what,
i hope this fiction will be the bonus story of pokemon
can you give a little story about blue and green? hehe i love that couple too...
| TopazSunshine chapter 2 . 10/22/2011
*cheers* YAY! Chapter 2! :D Well, at least this piece clears up lots of confusion :D and i can see the story developing! Great job! Can't wait for chapter 3 And I'm sorry if "Recollections" was tragic, I just couldn't imagine how to wake Sapphire up :/ *slaps self repeatedly* Why must I be so emo D: Oops, I'm rambling again. 8D Looking forward to more of this story! Hope to read more awesome works from you! :D
| SpecialPikachu chapter 2 . 10/21/2011
Wow Red, so this is your reason...
| Night Fiction chapter 2 . 10/20/2011
Like I said, sorry for my rudeness. Seem to not notice how mean I get.
| Berry Doyle chapter 2 . 10/18/2011
Short chapters, but they're fun! Can't wait for chapter 3!
| yukie-senpai chapter 2 . 10/18/2011
What could team R possibly have on Red to be able to blackmail him? \
this chap made me wonder v
cant wait to see the next chap, and dont worry about time. We can wait :D
| TopazSunshine chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Oh my! Red doesn't return Yellow's feelings? *screams*. Okay, i love the idea of this story. However, its a little rushed, don't you think? Maybe go a little more slower. Romance does take time to develop. But, I like the story! Keep it up! I'm looking forward to more from you :) And, thanks for reviewing nearly all my fanfics! Your reviews give me lots of encouragement, and I'm really touched by them. I hope we can stay awesome friends! (P.S, i just checked out your bio. Did you know we're the same age?)
| Night Fiction chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
The story was too fast and felt rushed, add some depth within the characters. Saying 'I love you' off the bat, not even half way in the story is rather annoying.
Though, your story is not good or bad, I'll give you that.
But, demanding for reviews to just continue a two chapter story is desperate and noobish.
I can take a guess at why Red doesn't want to tell her.
He's going to MT. Silver.
| tigrun chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
i love it
| yukie-senpai chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
all i want to say is that i hope to se the next chap. soon i know Yellow was ooc but that what i loved about this story, i hope to see what red is hiding XD.
keep up the good work