|Reviews for It Don't Mean a Thing|
| littlewinter chapter 32 . 10/15/2012
Oh. That was a perfect ending, both happy and sad at once. You kind of left me on the poor-Edward-train there. I feel sorry for him, but then it was sad in a good way. Good ending. Perfect story.
I have really enjoyed reading this (though it has taken me some time to finish it *ahem*), and even though I'm glad to see how it ends it's also kind of sad that it's over. I'm curious; are you working on anything else at the moment?
Thank you for a wonderful story, a wonderful use of words, perfect sentences, funny images and loads of grinning. You've done a great job :)
| littlewinter chapter 31 . 10/15/2012
Woah! That was some heavy predictions! I feel bad for Edward though, but then I don't really see what she could have done differently either. I'm really looking forward to read the epilogue :)
| littlewinter chapter 30 . 10/15/2012
"...an official apology on behalf of the entire male species"
You always find the perfect thing to say. How do you do that? (not jealous at all). Oh, I loved it, all of it.
Leah and Charlie? An unexpected turn of events, but I liked it :)
| littlewinter chapter 29 . 10/15/2012
"...while Carlisle pours glasses of red wine he has brought for medicinal purposes."
This is really good. I can't believe it took me so long time to read it. You have me grinning and biting my finger nails all at once.
| littlewinter chapter 28 . 10/15/2012
Oh, he's there. Thank you. . .
| littlewinter chapter 26 . 10/15/2012
Uh oh. I sense baby.
| littlewinter chapter 25 . 10/15/2012
"Charlie nods to the interior of the house in the familiar way he has when he wants to gain casual entry to a premises."
"Emily is serving out cookies to a bunch of tribal men who have obviously all just put their tops on. Buttoned up wrong. Labels sticking out of ragged tees."
Hehe. I love your Charlie. This is brilliant.
| littlewinter chapter 24 . 10/15/2012
Creepy Victoria-battle in Bella's room. But good, I think.
For a second you had me thinking it was Jacob who came in through the window. I wonder what will happen to the pragnency ... This is addicting!
| littlewinter chapter 23 . 10/15/2012
Oh, it's me again... I didn't forget, I'm just part turtle :)
As always I love it.
So. A Charlie-Chapter! Good decision! I absolutely loved The Guy Who Knows Stuff-structure. And how he knows his job, but not what to do with his daughter.
"If she was, like, 30."
| Zoe1078 chapter 32 . 9/1/2012
Your writing is lovely. Thanks so much for posting your story. The tone, characterization, word choice: all spot on. Bravo!
| littlewinter chapter 22 . 8/2/2012
You had me laughing again. I can totally picture a bloody, naked Jacob in the Cullen's expensive, cream colored living room, holding a cushion.
I liked her talk with Edward. I feel bad for him, I do. I want them all to have happy endings! And now she's pregnant? I wonder how they take the news...
Your use of words are wonderful. Still laughing.
| littlewinter chapter 21 . 8/2/2012
Oh, I loved this. It was really funny, especially when Jacob figured out about the mind-reading while being sneaky about it. Another great chapter. And the last sentence made me melt :)
| littlewinter chapter 20 . 8/2/2012
I'll try to limit the copypasting, but it's not easy:
"Part of his wolf wants to lick every one of her wounds, and the other part craves the hunt where once and for all he can rip every damn limb off Victoria's stone body and send her burningburningburning into fiery oblivion."
Very dog-ish and Jacob-y all in one. Oh, and just one more:
"Have you considered that there's a steep cliff over there that would be perfect to throw you off right now?"
Heh. I'm grinning over here. Definitely very Jacob-y. Another wonderful chapter, as always. Oh, and sorry for another inappropriately late review. Time ran ahead of me. Again...
| Micah's Moonbeam chapter 32 . 7/25/2012
the way you described the sleeping babies, the little girl's blue dress, and the little boy's shock of black hair sticking up like a cocatoo was just too perfect and it killed me. loved this story so much.
| mharrison9101 chapter 32 . 7/14/2012
Great story! I stayed up ridiculously late trying to finish reading, and I am so glad I did. The ending was absolutely perfect.