|Reviews for My One Shots|
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/4/2014
I really liked but, when r u gonna update nevermore because that is awesome! So please update soon!
| Vampire of Romance chapter 3 . 10/19/2011
awww just all I can say about these one shots they are so awesome and just made me smile I enjoyed reading them :) all very well done
| Kira chapter 3 . 10/17/2011
Ohhh~ this was so cute! i loved it!
| The Cretin chapter 3 . 10/16/2011
Well I enjoyed it. I thought it was a good representation of Gar's self doubt that his character experiences. Likewise, Raven's acceptance is a good way for her to experience new things. I hope to read about the date. As for any new ideas...well maybe something about their interests for the future. In the comics, Gar was an actor at times and if I'm not mistaken, studied drama and such arts at school. Raven is heavy into literature, poetry, and the like. Gar was raised by one of the richest (but also harshest) heroes on the planet so I would daresay that while he is the way he is, he can actually be cultured as well...not to mention he was the godson of an African king. Raven was raised by monks. So its kinda funny that BB may be more at home among the rich and famous than she is. That might give some interesting ideas should they go to a fancy restaurant or hobnob with celebrities. I do like the little bit about her not wanting him to hide his appearance. She could pass for "normal" much easier than he could but you know that his appearance HAS to "get to him" sometimes. I would even daresay that it makes him a good target for prejudice. Kudos for bringing that detail up. I hope this review is sufficient. I wish I knew some better ideas to throw your way. I hope I've been of some help. I hope to read more soon. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 2 . 10/10/2011
Well...I enjoyed it. I thought it was pretty original. That's the thing about BB and Rae. The possibilities are endless. I've seen the same plot done a dozen times, each done differently. Likewise, BBRaeners never cease to amaze with new ideas. Now for suggestions, I'm not the best to ask. I always let the writer do the driving. Maybe some deep reflection between them on matters rarely covered would help. For example, I rarely see anything about how they each feel about religion. I know...its a touchy subject, especially when one is half-demon and the other would throw Charles Darwin for a loop but hey, maybe that could be something. Likewise, in the comic and the cartoon Raven has a hard time with new experiences. Imagine what could happen if she was the target of a cruel joke by the so called "normals" and BB leaps to her defense. I don't know, see I never write stories so I don't think I'm all that great of a help. But hey, I'm sure whatever you come up with, will be well worth reading. I hope to read more soon. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
Well I thought these were pretty neat. I'm not much of an AU fan but "Butterfly" was still cool in its own way. I'd have to say my fave was "How". I hope to read more. You seem to have put alot of thought to these. Keep rockin