|Reviews for Another Dimension|
| MelancholyMonochrome chapter 2 . 10/26/2011
So many points where I burst out laughing.
Peggy sounds awesome XD
And I love Ryoko... Kawaii!
| MelancholyMonochrome chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Didn't quite get what was going on but I'm sure it will be explained in the next chapter. Also I think you want to use P.O.V's? Marik's P.O.V Ryou's P.O.V
Also things seem a bit rushed. Just putting it out there