|Reviews for WitFit Prompts October 2011|
| Ausgirl101 chapter 21 . 10/30/2011
Firstly, why did you give the baby such a skanky name like Chloe? Why not a beautiful name like, I don’t know, Renesmee (cue huge eye roll). Thank you btw.
This entry reminded me so much of the feelings I used to have when my little girl was around this age. I have lots of those moments freeze-framed in my memories. Just smells and hugs and moments. I used to worry that I held her and kissed her too much.
You evoke that powerlessness that I think some men feel - after they have witnessed their women giving birth - even if they are not traumatic experiences. That longing for another but guilt over what they now realise they will go through. Women are so awesome - lol.
My favourite line was when Edward thought to himself 'I liked being Santa’. It seemed like a futuristic Rob thing to say.
I’m so impressed that you continue to write in the midst of promo Rob!
| NixDucky chapter 20 . 10/30/2011
Hmm. I like the Jane Eyre influence.
| NixDucky chapter 16 . 10/30/2011
Oh I like this story. Would love to know what happens next...
| NixDucky chapter 15 . 10/30/2011
I really like these two. I mighta said that before...
| NixDucky chapter 11 . 10/30/2011
Very Le Sigh...
| NixDucky chapter 10 . 10/30/2011
Aaaaw that's kinda sad. And kinda beautiful.
| NixDucky chapter 9 . 10/30/2011
I like these guys. You should write a full story about them. Chapters and chapters long. No, really ;)
| NixDucky chapter 8 . 10/30/2011
This was really good. Dramatic & realistic. It gripped me from the start.
| NixDucky chapter 5 . 10/29/2011
Oh I do like this Bella!
| NixDucky chapter 2 . 10/29/2011
| NixDucky chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Oh yay! I'm so glad to see these characters again! It's taken me a while to get to this, but it's been on my to read list since the update arrived in my inbox. Should read through the lot now :) Woot!
| abinar chapter 21 . 10/28/2011
Bad. Pffft! It's all cute and warm and fuzzy. Awww I love a happy Edward.
| Whitbysucks chapter 19 . 10/28/2011
I need a hanky to dab my brow. That was intense.
| tinkrbe1l3 chapter 20 . 10/26/2011
who no like this storyline? i love it. you write it very well. period writing is not something i'm currently comfortable with. i love reading it so much but can't tap into that part of my brain to produce a story. this story is very rich. the whole chapter played in front of my eyes clearly.
| rinabina chapter 20 . 10/26/2011
When I picture this Edward...I picture him with layers and layers of coats and waistcoats and overcoats...so he looks bigger and broader. More...highlander-y, lol. More burly. Oh, and DEFINITELY scruffy. Scruffyyyyyyyyy.
The setting you have in this vignette is lovely and I like the little flirting Ed's got going on. Very different than our last visit with them, that's for sure.
*sighs* I really enjoyed this. Thanks for bringing us back here with you :)