I suppose I saw the ending coming but damn Green releasing his pokemon made me burst into tears. I finished Emerald and Fire Red on my emulator ages ago but I could never find it in me to delete the files from my phone because that would be like releasing /my/ pokemon. :'( kudos!

You just shattered my heart and there's so many tears and I will never recover from this scarring why. It's way too good with the sheer emotional suffering and I want to hug it forever because the whole story (I will not recover).
(At all).

I decided to reread this.
I'm going to cry.

First time im mad at red. This was very sad and I wish a different ending to this but this is more realistic so awesome story.

Well that was depressing.

you literally just broke me and i am literally sobbing heavily. why this

I cried legit tears.

OMG crying why you do this to meee T_T

That was so sad… Could you maybe make a version where Red saves Green in time or something?

Oh my. beautiful raw story. Love your writing. This was so real, and painful. It touched me, and reminded me to not ever end up like poor Red. I don't ever want to hurt someone like he hurt Green. Green felt, and you showed us his feelings, so wonderfully. I felt them as if they were my own. And this is why I don't ever want to hurt someone. I don't want to cause someone this much pain.

Thank you for writing and sharing!
MAL

Holy...shit...wait did Green commit suicide? This was truly really fucking sad and my heart feels like it's getting ripped apart and this is really sad ;( I sorta feel mad at Red I don't know bit green DX poor sweet green ;(

Holy crap that made me cried the end, and the fic was filled with so much sadess and angst that I couldn't stop myself reading it. ((;; . ;;))

Anyway, You did a really great job in this! The sentences that you had put in really brings out green's emotions. It was a fascinating and rough ride through the story that I could never forget the impression it left in me. Really enjoyed it a lot! Hope there would be a sequel :)

Sooo sad ;-; .
That line where Red breaks into a run.. I feel so much for them both... I'm frustrated at such a tragedy, where both of the worst in their personalities make them just miss love. Red not knowing how to speak and explain, and Green not knowing how to wait and observe... So sad... The feels TT_TT . amazing story.

IM NOT OKAY i knew what was gonna happen but the way you wrote it...and the splat thing OMG I broke down crying right there

OMG... That was beautiful... I really tried to stop my tears but I couldn't stop some of it...

Anyway, I also like how you wrote it and if there were any typos, I didn't notice it...

I also like how you were able to make the other minor characters act in a not so very OOC way...

Thanks for sharing your story... :)