Reviews for One Last Breath of Imperfection
InsertDecentNameHere chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I don't know why you don't like this, I love it!

Somehow the fics where they kiss passionately and become a sweet and soppy couple doesn't seem realistic. The idea that they just don't realize their feelings, and refuse to admit it if they do seems more realistic, and I think you portrayed the scenario perfectly.

Well done!
Misselis chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
it was still good
UrgeToDance chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
What do you mean you don't like it? I for one, loved it. My eyes felt kind of wet near the end. *sniffles* Those two are so cute.
GeneralGeneric chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
I liked this one-shot and the scene in the original, mainly for the giant amount of feelings and tension. It was especially awful in the manga, since that chapter ended right with Hawkeye getting her throat slit and the viewers had to wait a whole month for that to be resolved.

Seeing this from Riza's point of view was very interesting. I particularly liked this line:

"She would not be the catalyst that brought about the fall of Amestris."

Quite intense. And people say that this isn't canon, bah.
LockedBackground chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
What are you talking about? You did an AMAZING job! You, my friend, have just written my new favorite FMA oneshot.