Reviews for Giving Up
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
You know... I rather like this first version best. It's spare, and it doesn't over-explain. It leaves a lot implicit- and that's very much in the spirit of Strongbow. I know you rewrote it, and added a lot- but this first version here is a very nice retelling of the scene. Thanks for sharing it!
Writer of Aenen chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Whew! Man, I was on the edge of my seat with that one! Despite knowing this scene well myself, you have such a way with words that it was easy for me to get lost in it, just as I am every time I pick up ElfQuest. Wonderful!
Beatrisu chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Nice. Very nice... Well done!
Darke Angelus chapter 1 . 2/22/2004
Excellent story- I remember that sequence of events like I had read the comic yesterday (instead of fifteen years ago) and you expanded on the thoughts and inner turmoil of the individual characters to perfection. Very well done!
The Seeker chapter 1 . 11/26/2003


Simply outstanding.

Do continue, if you can...
Tyleet87 chapter 1 . 5/18/2002
that was such a good story! please update your other fic too!
Jenn Osborne chapter 1 . 5/6/2002