Reviews for A Rager's Promise
Tytonic chapter 7 . 2/13
I must say this is written very well, it's like a story summary, just with more detail. It's not the amount of words that matters, it's how you use them that matters. You should really take this, and stretch it into a real story, there is certainly the potential, and I know you have the skill to do so.

I can't help but so outdone here, how your writing is far superior to mine. However, I am not so blind as to not see my own potential. I will not rid myself of the truth. I cannot deny the fact that I am a good writer, and with experience I will improve greatly. I have only written, not even finished yet, one story to date. Writing as good as yours drives me to improve my own, to someday surpass people like you as a writer.
hungergamesfan77 chapter 9 . 8/19/2012
ok hard to find a story as good as this UPDATE SOON
Guest chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
Love
VotumAstrum chapter 7 . 6/13/2012
Good! Although the ending didn't really match the feeling of the beginning. He beginning was more sort of just describing the atmosphere of the wedding, and then at the end you kinda jus randomly mixed in Ripred's feelings about love,which was kinda like a whole seperate topic. I think that they would have benn better as two different poems and then you could maybe add elaborations and depth to them. Great ideas though! Keep up the good work! I was really suprised when I read this because I have not read it in a while and it was the beginning of a great set of ideas for a wedding and children. I am really interested to see Ripred's feelings about their children and his thoughts on their relationship. I would like to see the story go in that direction with various stabs of fighting and battle and maybe some inner war thing going on. Great ideas!
Team Juggernaut chapter 2 . 6/7/2012
I, for one, don't want you to update!
Team Juggernaut chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
I can say onething: W...T...F...IS THIS?

It isn't good, for one thing. A poem, really? You stink...
The Maine Coon Cat chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Very nice! :)
X.E.A.M chapter 5 . 6/3/2012
loveLuxa Gregorwedding babies AWESOME STORIES ADN MORE REVIEWS!
Ellenar Ride chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
... Awesome. Although I must ask why Ripred refers to Gregor as "his" Warrior. And seriously?

"He will live.

Even if I must be there to save his sorry ass."

It's PERFECT!

Seriously.

I mean it.
VotumAstrum chapter 3 . 4/2/2012
I really, really, really, really, really, really, really love the poetic quality of this story. It is very short and sweet, but it is so good at telling Ripred's story and feelings. I command you to write more. (P.S. I tryied something new! i actually made a serious but neptic review! Am I not awesome:) )

Signed,

Your Ever Insane but Amazing Buddy VotumAstrum:)
the-other-em chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
I... don't get this chapter...

Could it possibly have something to do with one of your other fan fictions?

I must go investigate...

Lee
the-other-em chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I love this! You should write more stories in this poem-like style. It was short but you got a lot done! I also enjoyed not seeing a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Congratulations! You are one of the few people on this site who payed attention at least one day in English class.

Please keep writing,

Lee
Overlander43 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Lovely poem :3 3
CheesetothePower chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
It's a great poem. Do you mind if I add it to a community?