Reviews for Til I Said it to You
woosh48 chapter 12 . 2/6/2012
I like that it wasn't easy for Edward. It will be fun to see if he can figure out how to win hailey over.
deesirius chapter 12 . 2/4/2012
Whoa Hailey is INTENSE! I dunno what I wouldve done in that situation! And Im glad Edward didnt run away! It def sucks when a child decides they hate you already, but im sure in no time Edward will have hailey wrapped around his fingers!

p.s. Alice is still a twat!
Ali871 chapter 12 . 1/31/2012
Really great story :)))I think Hailey is one of the best kids in fandom, and this story has me rooting for Bella and Edward! Awesome job!
zotic1988 chapter 12 . 1/29/2012
please update soon. love it
Veronique24 chapter 12 . 1/28/2012
Time and patience Edward, time and patience and maybe toy or two would help!
Daisy Grace chapter 12 . 1/27/2012
Okay, well, I'm a new reader to your story and I'm REALLY enjoying it. (and I've read hundreds of Twilight fanfics, completed, WIP's, abandoned fics, you name it!)

Your story is somewhat unique because of Edward's background. I've read many fics with Bella being a single mom and many more where the child was actually his that he never knew about when he abandoned her. And I've read those where the rich, arrogant Edward is trying to "cheat" the system by hiring a fake girlfriend to prove to his parents that he's "changed." But your story is different.

I get the feeling that Edward may choose this life over his former one and I'm wondering if Carlisle & Esme will be okay with that. They've cut all ties with him (although I don't think that they thought they were) and now, he's finding himself and examining himself as to what makes him "tick." They messed with the status quo and what if they don't get back the son to pass on their family business/inheritance to because he has changed just that much and doesn't wish to be a part of it? And what of Bella? When she finds this out, oh my! - I don't even want to think about it. She has so much well-deserved pride that she has earned the hard way. I don't know if she will be able to EVER accept that sort of life.

I think that they are both finding love for the first time. And it's kinda beautiful to read. And the H-monster. Bella has indulged her too much but she was the only one that could do it. Now, she's raised a little jealous one and may I say, we are heading into the "terrible twos"? Oh, my, the tantrums.

Wonderful story and I will be following for the next update! Till next ~ Daze
yippiekayay chapter 10 . 1/27/2012
Edward better tell Bella soon! and he should call esme. but I understand if it's better for the plot if he waits ;)
bigchill77 chapter 12 . 1/26/2012
Enjoying your story and writing. Thanks for sharing.
Chilly Howdy chapter 12 . 1/25/2012
Hey Sweetheart! Sorry its taken me like forever to read this wonderful update :) WOW! Hailey Jo sure gave Edward a run for his money huh! Oh well at least he didn't run 10 miles when and after :) Thanks for the wonderful! See you next time Chilly x
joice84 chapter 12 . 1/24/2012
Hey! you come back!;D Poor Edward is so vulnerable here! and Hailey was a bad girl lol i loved this chapter and I missed it! hope you can update soon!1

Phoenix-Wolfx9 chapter 12 . 1/22/2012
It's a great story and the chapter was really good. I love this Bella and Edward and I do love Hailey even if she has her bad moments, which are normal since she's not even 2. Hope to read more soon!
Lulutbo chapter 12 . 1/22/2012
I was so much enjoying this story that I didn't realize that it was complete till I hit ch 12...bummed I now have to wait for updates ;) loving it!
SleepMyBella chapter 12 . 1/21/2012
What a great chapter! I love your story. Thank you!
cutigerteacher02 chapter 12 . 1/21/2012
Great chapter. I really love this story. You are doing a great job!
jetstreamRose chapter 12 . 1/21/2012
Edward is going to have to show a lot of patience and understanding with Hailey if he wants to be a part of Bella's life with Hailey. He used to take and never give. Now he will have to be selfless to become part of both of their lives.

I really enjoy how you write your characters in such a real world way. Bella imagined the day out with Edward to be perfect...the way she wanted things to go was fairytale-ish and life just doesn't go that way. Life is more likely to end in a Hailey temper tantrum unlike any she has had before.

I'm looking forward to seeing this maturing Edward put someone ahead of himself in order to become someone who is a healthy presence in Bella and Hailey's life.

There is so much to this story that I can't wait to find out about. Looking forward to the next chapter. Happy Writing :)
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