Reviews for Child of the Godslayers
Lorelei Candice Black chapter 4 . 7/19
Vdubbya chapter 6 . 4/3
Really enjoyed reading this story - romance, humor, drama - it had it all. Super sweet ending as well. Thank you.
alicewiggles chapter 6 . 2/16/2014
that was beautiful
alicewiggles chapter 5 . 2/16/2014
did you see the movie three men and a baby you wrote the SGC and the baby are it take's an classified military base to have a baby you know instead of a village
alicewiggles chapter 4 . 2/16/2014
run Teal'c
Guest chapter 3 . 12/14/2013
Mariam? If you meant the girl that could build a naquada Generator and what not before reverting to a four year old, her name was MERIN.

And the nanites never made Jack age backwards. Hello! He got old(er) not younger. Aging backwards would imply getting younger instead of older; and he certainly got older. Unless you're living in some Kind of Benjamin Button world.
Also, why would the nanites cause the baby to grow faster while still in the would, but revert the process once it's born and have it deage into non existence?

One logic hole beside the other.

So, the wrong name could be forgiven, since the girl isn't important to the Story. But the nanite workings... Seriously not.
wonderwoman1970 chapter 5 . 6/23/2013
hahahah love these guys love the humor you write its so them
wonderwoman1970 chapter 3 . 6/23/2013
I just love Jack and this story rocks
Guest chapter 6 . 4/8/2013
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bec chapter 6 . 10/19/2012
Love it
SamKay61 chapter 6 . 6/1/2012
I loved your story! I especially like the interaction with jacob. Perfect!
kahless21 chapter 6 . 1/3/2012
great story. keep up the good work.
RhizOneill chapter 6 . 10/24/2011
Saissa chapter 6 . 10/22/2011
Thank you for fixing up the spelling.

The whole story reads much more smoothly now.
Anna Doherty chapter 3 . 10/22/2011
Very funny chapter couldn't stop laughing
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