Reviews for Complication
Guest chapter 6 . 4/17
Well... I like the the story and the idea you were planning on but it look cut off to fast maybe you should make it longer with more to the problem with Green and Silver but other than that great story .
PhaedraDarkstar chapter 6 . 3/5/2012
Hey! A chapter! This one was a short chapter 0-0 Really short, haha. Why Melody? When everyone around her is named after colours and stuff? You'd think she'd carry that on and call her daughter something to do with that. And something about her phone? Next chapter sounds exciting! (Definitely going to be Silver texting her, declaring his love for Green...Dum de dum, because y'know...you totally support secondaryshipping xD)
MOFZ19 chapter 6 . 3/4/2012
Yessss! You updated! :D

...not like I'm one to talk :/

Omg. Drama mama! Seriously. Blue, Y U CHEAT ON GREEN MAYBE? Y U MARRY HIM IF U CHEAT...maybe...
Kelina Dawn Hearan chapter 5 . 2/27/2012
Had it 9 months? Or is Blue having a miscarriage?
PreciousAll chapter 5 . 12/20/2011
Blue is in hospital? have it 9 month yet? wow! the baby is going to born soon and don't tell me that silver is assummed to be that father's child by the baby! omo..
PreciousAll chapter 4 . 12/20/2011
Wahaha.. green is so mean! interrogation! wahahaha..

good story! aww.. green is angry
PhaedraDarkstar chapter 5 . 12/6/2011
Green, you're a terrible father and now you've missed something important! *Shakes head disapprovingly*

And Silver trying to get a job in the police amuses me very much, haha!
MudkipCake chapter 5 . 12/5/2011
Hurray, another chapter!

Heheh, Green is turning Daisy and Prof. Oak's house into a pigsty. And -gasp- he "broke" into Blue's house, and went through her last calls. If you hadn't said that the last call was to the hospital, I would've assumed it was to Silver.

Despite the chapter being short, I enjoyed it. Good job, I'm looking forward to more updates. :]
SS19 chapter 4 . 12/5/2011
WHAT? Silver, sorry, but I kinda hate your fing guts right now...

Drama mama!

Fleroooop.

~MOFZ19 aka SS19
Thundercat1 chapter 5 . 12/5/2011
Thundercar, really lol,

good chapter

looks like Blues having the baby!
PreciousAll chapter 3 . 11/29/2011
Blue, you cheat! so why you marry him and even get pregnant if you don't love him as much as you love Silver! oh, i'm dying!

Poor Green, please update... T.T
Moonlightkitty000 chapter 2 . 11/15/2011
Oh my goodness! Nuuuuuuu lols xD
Posco chapter 3 . 10/26/2011
I hope Green gets over his anger. What's his job anyway?

*Your english teacher cought you? That reminds me of the time I had no choice but to share a fanfiction because I didn't know it was my share date and that's what I was working on.

Update Soon!
FrozenRose9298 chapter 3 . 10/26/2011
Wow Green may be thinking of a break up thanks to this ...

P.S you were typing in your English class o_O...
Thundercat1 chapter 3 . 10/26/2011
good chapter, Green should be mad at Blue for this! but then again Green, don't harass Silver, hes too awsonme for that! anyway can't wait for the next chapter.
28 | Page 1 2 Next »