Reviews for Hearts
timespacepirate chapter 2 . 5/25/2014
This story is beautiful. I love stories when Rose is able to be with the Doctor. And your writing style is lovely. It reminds me somewhat of the rhythm of a song or poetry. Don't let the haters get you down. They're bonkers. (As Donna would say)
fancyandschmancy chapter 2 . 4/11/2014
Just wanted to let you know how much I loved this. It was perfect! And also, when I read your note at the beginning of the second chapter, it actually made me angry that people would tell you anything bad about this fic. Like you said at the end, if you have nothing nice to say then just don't say anything. If it's not their type of fic, just move on! There's no need to be rude! Maybe I'm just defensive because I thought this was a fantastic story. Anyway, that was all probably from forever ago so sorry for possibly bringing up old sores, but either way, great job! :)
crzykittyfangirl chapter 2 . 2/4/2014
Raggetymanftw chapter 2 . 12/3/2013
That was so sweet! I loved it! Thank-you :)
thena-ditey chapter 2 . 2/26/2013
Fabulous. I really enjoy your writing style. :)
OnTheLastPage chapter 2 . 12/17/2012
I have to say... my favorite part "He will never forgive her. He will never be able to thank her enough" That is beautiful. And don't listen to what people say.. I'm afraid to post my story but I really should.. to see what people think but yeah.. Brilliant.
thatnerdychic chapter 2 . 3/10/2012
Fantastic story. I loved your interpretation of the Doctor's no refractory period.
Princess Reinette chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
AWW! So sweet! I loved the style you used - the few words made the text even more powerful. Keep Writing!
SilverLunarStar chapter 2 . 12/12/2011
(Was nosy and decided to check out what you were talking about. This is coming from someone who appreciated the Twilight Saga before it became enormously huge: This is nothing like the Twilight Saga. Just because, as you said, you wanted a TimeLady!Rose - or the like as in this fic - doesn't mean it's like Bella wanting to be a vampire to stay with Edward forever. If this was not their cup of tea, they could have at least been constructive in their criticism.

Sorry for the rant, but reviews like that seriously irritate me.)

*Back to the story*

Again, love how you made her more part-Time Lady than fully (not that I don't love TimeLady!Rose fics 'cause I do and it still would have been awesome, but this provides a different aspect which I adore).

The fact that the Doctor isn't supposed to stand what she's become (a little like Jack, I suppose, but not a FIXED point, a PARADOX - and just how brilliantly thought out is that? Absolutely brilliant.), yet because he's "too selfish" is so poignant.

How much do I love that it was Rose who pushed him against the console?

I reiterate: GORGEOUS!

*Adds to favorite stories*
SilverLunarStar chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Oh. My. Gosh.

This. Just this.

Absolutely gorgeous. I love how you took something others have written several times about (Rose's expanded life) and given it a unique aspect (her heart beating slower than that of a normal human's).

The whole imagery when their minds met was beautiful!

Plus, the addition of the dreams and Rose speaking Gallifreyan... Lovely!

*Goes to next chapter*
thejacinthsong chapter 2 . 11/30/2011
Screw the "Twilight" guy - I love this! I'm so happy you posted this, I honestly prefer stories where Rose has her forever. Even when they're blissfully happy and reunited, the knowledge that she's still human kills me. I am beginning to ramble - my ORIGINAL point, is that this is amazing. Thank you for writing it.
T'Kirr chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
This is absolutely beautiful! Poetry in prose, and the concept of the TARDIS having such an effect in both of them... I've never seen it so attractively realized. Rose really shines here, bringing out a fuller meaning behind her connection to the TARDIS just before his regeneration, suggesting a long lasting effect that finally brings them together here. Her dreams seem timeless, which is perfect.
Chris4 chapter 2 . 11/6/2011
What a great story! I loved it!
Nadie en el mundo chapter 2 . 10/20/2011
I've got just one thing to say: I love you :)
Dinny93 chapter 2 . 10/9/2011
I liked it, whatever anyone else had to say :) Always up for a nice bit of Ten/Rose, me. There's something about your writing style I really like too, though I'm not quite sure how to describe it. I think it may be the "he/she" usage... Eh. Whatever it is, there's something, and I know that's pretty useless as creative crit, but whatever :)

If you're offering, I'd love to read a third chapter, but it's just as good left where it is - "He doesn't care." Such a lovely sentiment. I miss Rose.

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