Reviews for Through The Veil
semantics chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Elf Knight chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
I am an avid fan of Harmony (Harry/Hermione) and I hate Mary Sues (generally female OC's) in fanfiction but you did a great job of Mrs. Granger and this whole one-shot was funny and clever in a peculiar sort of way. I just don't understand how she could know he was Harry and how Harry could have been with her at Hogwarts. It was epic though and I enjoyed it. The fanfic was certainly a part from the norm and that alone has earned my approval.

Awesome! :-)
Basilisk1 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
I don't know if you'll continue this or not, but it's got great potential as a longer fic...
solitare chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
If you make another chapter of this can you make Hermione have a crush on Harry before he went through the veil? You know, just for the laughs that could come from that.
little.poette chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
so brilliant!
swdrone chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
wasn't real impressed while reading it but the last three lines between Hermione and Harry makes a great punchline. Best to leave it as a one-shot. Any more and it would be ruined/bogged down. Thanks.
spidermonkey92k chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
just a thought is Hermione the chosen one/prophesied one because harry has beatvoldermort 3 times not counting the first time when he was 1 as that was more his mother
Vaneesa85 chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Loving it
Undermann chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
How dare you torture us so...

Brilliant and novel concept that really needs fleshing out.

If you're not going to do it yourself please make it a challenge or free it up for someone to continue from where you stopped.

So many possibilities!
MadamBlack chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
When i read the description of the story, i immediately thought I would not enjoy it (it says it is a fic with a pairing of Harry P and Dr Granger) but it was on a friend's favorites and gave it a shot. It was short but good.
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Fun story and a bit surprising. Thanks for sharing!
Shannon Dee chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Let the wailing and gnashing of teeth commence until you give us another chapter.
Ella Marie Lily Talia Potter chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Holy cow! That was awesome!
Darath chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Wow, this has so, so much potential! I wish you'd write more!
Horace Nihil chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Freudian indeed. I guess Hermione will need a shrink to (re)set her straight after this one :D.

It might have been better if you'd not told us that Harry's new name is 'Granger' so early in the story.

Nice plot, though.
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