Very nice! I am really enjoying this piece, and girls names for this piece I think should be quite powerful, I've always loved the name Arianna, it's kind of otherworldly, dark, mysterious?

Lol, whatever you chose, I'm sure it will be great :)

Can't wait to read more!

Oooh, very nice indeed!

This was such a great movie, and you've captured the feel and darkness perfectly.

Well done!

First of all it's , you've an interesting story going on here. Keep at it. I think Angela would be a good name. Or Isabel. In the end, it's your choice.

Hmm maybe Skylar or Michala?

I really like where you're going with this. :) I hope you plan to continue it. I'd like to read it. :)

very nice beginning. I love the movie too. Keep writing. I can't wait to know more about this new Arc.